#200+ Applications No Offer. I'll take any and all criticism

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indigo turret
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200+ Applications No Offer

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200+ Applications No Offer. I'll take any and all criticism

ionic gazelle
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DATA MINE!!!!

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join VIP bro

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also for data mine you can put data science intern

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ik what ward says, but all my friends put it as data science intern

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bold numbers and technologies

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for the suny resaerch if there is a webpage for the research team add that

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ngl i thought boiler blockchain didnt do anything 💀

indigo turret
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Depends on the project tbh

indigo turret
ionic gazelle
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nah not rlly but if someone looks at it

indigo turret
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Yeah idk I feel like my resume is alright but its not very swe specialized which is prolly hurting me

ionic gazelle
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wait also for data mine

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why is it not like the others

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the format

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of the header

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put the company name, put data science intern under it

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leave it after that

indigo turret
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I just did what they told me to but prolly not a good idea in retrospect

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should've changed it a lot sooner

ionic gazelle
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'if someone asks "My school has a program where they partner us with corporate sponsors, and we work on a project for production with mentors fromt he company"

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something along those lines

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last bullet point in there is also useless

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also use vmock

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we get free 10 tries

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as cs students

indigo turret
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hm ok

indigo turret
ionic gazelle
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maybe you can squeeze it in somewhere else?

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its taking a whole line rn

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could be used for something else int heftuure

indigo turret
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Yeah when I have more to add I def need to compress but I don't have too much more rn

ionic gazelle
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also you have jira in the tools line

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so ats picks it up from there anyway

indigo turret
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good point

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I've changed my resume a lot through this cycle

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so didn't pick up on that

ionic gazelle
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youre a sophomore still

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chilling honestly

indigo turret
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I added the technical skills part for keywords lol

ionic gazelle
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are you intl?

indigo turret
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nah

ionic gazelle
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yth then yorue fine

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honestly maybe with reworked bullet pioints this should be decent chance for amazon oa

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or something

indigo turret
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What would you change about the bullets?

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I've messed around with it a little adding more detail into what technologies i've used but not much more than that

ionic gazelle
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for suny role that first point is kind of odd

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its needed

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im just thinking of how to chagne it

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boilerblock chain attended regular company calls

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useless bullet point

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remove it

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or combibne with the one above

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youre atending 2 weekly meetings with data mine but you dont mention that, no point in making it a big deal with club

indigo turret
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true

ionic gazelle
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also for grad date

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dont put present

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either put Expected (date)

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or Aug 2023- May 202x

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it probably doesnt anymore but id also put grad date early by 1 year

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did you go to career fairs

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we had one 2 weeks ago

indigo turret
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I didn't go this semester, I was planning on it but I didn't really prioritize them and had schedule conflcits

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I went to a lot last semester though

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got a few interviews but nothing else

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and the companies weren't crazy

ionic gazelle
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mm yh you shouldve gone

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amazon and amd went crazy