#Feedback much appreciated!!

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ashen saddle
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It’s fairly weak due to trivial experience and overinflated titles. Listing tech after ur professional position is also very non standard and I wouldn’t recommend it personally (demonstrates limited scope and competency).

Your business impact is difficult to understand, including w the arbitrage business, where - again - you’re using a lot of nonstandard ways to talk about this specific part of the business (having worked in finance, I can immediately tell you’re bullshitting). I would recommend continuing to iterate and improve on your bullets

Like this much might be ok for a first internship, but I’d suggest improving technical awareness there with all aspects of your resume

swift cedar
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laughably overly harsh and critical?

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lol

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great way to respond to feedback

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don't ask me how i saw this

fiery wraith
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But this is just weird going back this far