looking for new grad roles, please review and lmk what to improve

[void musk]

i think its pretty good, but i would work on those bullet points. it feels like theres barely any content in your points, like just add more details/info

[atomic hatch]

dude nasa internship should be the star of the show

[ashen coral]

thinking more of like what it is and less what i used in it you mean?

[void musk]

have both

for example, just looking at the NASA one:
"Designed a relational database using SQLite to improve data access" is telling me nothing tbh

just add more detail. like what is the context, are there any metrics?

that being said, ik ur prob on a NDA for NASA so i get it if ur not too detailed as well

[ashen coral]

yeah i think im catching on to what you mean

but yeah i guess i struggle a bit with making the bullets lol but ill try to add more context to them, appreciate the tip dude

[void musk]

a good way that ive been doing it is by just telling chatgpt as much as possible of what ive done (that im allowed to tell / not against NDA), and then just tell chatgpt to create bullet points for me