3+ YOE, SWE & ML, callback rate 2/1300+, Pls Roast my resumes

[misty cradle]

I have tailored my resume for SWE and ML/Datascience

[misty cradle]

@maiden verge , could you pls provide some feedbacks when you are free?

[maiden verge]

Are you international? It’s a bit odd to not include bachelors

[misty cradle]

I'm international. Yeah I normally keep bachelors, just removed for this version of resume as I wanted to fit all the contents in one page resume here. But yeah I'll add it back again.

[opaque zephyr]

your experience (full time & intern) needs to be in one experience section sorted chronologically

[misty cradle]

Thank you @opaque zephyr , one of the previous suggestion I received was to highlight my experience at Sony over other internship, and to achieve that they suggested to put internship in different section and maintain the reverse chronology. But do you think its better to have proper chronology ?

[opaque zephyr]

ive never seen a resume doing what you say they suggested so i have no idea

[maiden verge]

My personal opinion (haven’t asked about this before tho) is that enough ppl see masters grads w recent internships that it should immediately make sense to recruiters/hiring managers if you keep experience together in chronological order.

That being said, I think you can change your internship titles for clarity: Data Science Intern -> Data Engineer Intern, AI Intern -> AI Engineer Intern

Some of your bullets are strong (particularly your early Sony role), but a lot of others could use clarity (“reduced support inquires” how? “Pioneered user-centric ai interfaces” as in?)

For your senior role at Sony, I would just move all awards to the bottom bullet -> “Won the “Award of Excellence”, “Sony Quality Award”, and “Best Performer of the Quarter” for exceptional performance

[misty cradle]

Thank you so much @maiden verge , @opaque zephyr . Yeah I'll wor on these feedbacks.

@maiden verge , regarding “reduced support inquires (how?) ",

In this line I wanted to convey I reduced support queries with the help of NLP and Live Chat Integration with Salesforce. Do you mean I should expand more on this with tech depth?

[tired narwhal]

someone from UB???

[maiden verge]

No, you’re still only talking about tech - it’s unclear what you did exactly

Try to read your resume from an outside perspective

[misty cradle]

Yess