would like to receive some honest advice, only receiving auto OA's thanks!

[coarse loom]

bump

[coarse loom]

@tidal depot 🙏

[tight lintel]

id remove concepts jsut because all the important one seems covered by relevant coursework

feels too fluffy

for all bullets i've been advised to either do

• Built X using Y, achieving Z
  OR
• Built X, achieving Z, using Y

used deep link twice (which idek)

most bullets look fine -- id just take a look at the template above and make sure you have metrics for your lower bullets

swift in languages as well

[coarse loom]

tyty

[coarse loom]

bump

[tidal depot]

• Remove concepts
• I’d bump down skills - skills-first resumes imo are outdated and you show enough focus on react here in your experience.
• I’d not list out technologies if you’re going to incorporate them into your bullets
• feels like a good number of bullets should be rewritten for clarity and conciseness - keep it straightforward. Don’t repeat/overemphasize tech

Strangely, the way you write about your experience gives me low confidence in you as a typescript dev. I’ll think on it more, but feel free to ping me again after your next revision

For bullets, example would be for bullet 1 -> “Launched Apple Pay for Relay cards, increasing mobile adoption by XX% “

[thick aurora]

Hi @tidal depot , it’s only been a couple of days since I joined the server but your reviews are 🔥, had to drop my resume here. Think you could shoot me up with some feedback? I’m in the same boat as this dude, only getting those auto OAs
[international student applying for summer 2025 swe intern positions]

[coarse loom]

also this is still under a feature flag so i just threw a number that chatgpt would deem reasonable