#Rising Junior entering summer 2025 internship cycle

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lethal gale
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because many of your bullets are slightly over 1 line long so they wrap around

oak loom
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start on the next line

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so u get 1 full line + 1 mostly empty line if your bullets are too long

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like project 2 bullet 2, it has 2 full lines and a nearly empty 3rd line

lethal gale
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the 10+ is better left out

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some of the numbers better left out

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i would make it "Improved visuals and resolved frontend bugs in Flutter [user satisfaction thing optimal]". The 20% feels kinda BS so either support that number with some indication of user surveys/evidence or drop it

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Snake is too simple of a project to keep on your resume. You can write a game with more depth very easily (connect 4 can be like 2-4 nights of work)

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(official title) is kinda weird, is there a reason you are writing that out?

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"implemented" is not right grammatically to refer to Jira

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the "swift issue resolution" is redundant since you're giving the number right after. so keeping just the number part is good

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last bullet point for startup is good

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I don't think Matlab belongs under libraries, it would be better under languages. Then at that point try to roll Pygame up into the frameworks list

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"20% improvement in problem-solving skills" is another number that sounds BS

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put a period at the end of the bullet points for project1

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In general you need better experience so try to hit the ground running with classes in Fall and go above and beyond on any class projects

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if not more personal projects

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if you do do a personal project I think you'd look better for full-stack stuff if you did database work

lethal gale
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oh like where you wrote "(Official Title)" that's not what the actual resume says? the actual resume says like <XX of YY>?

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ok

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hm that may be true but the resume is definitely frontend-leaning. Especially if the reader starts with the SWE internship. So perhaps you can reorder the project bullets to put backend first, and expand on the Supabase stuff?

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what it does -> tech is ok
On that note the structure of "XXX based on user input about YYY" is another thing that gives frontend vibes. IMO you could adjust the YYY part to shorten + de-emphasize it

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only trading and some unicorns; majority of places not even open. I think now is a perfectly fine time to tune up your resume, you only need a couple days :)

lethal gale