#looking for internships

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gritty ice
worthy mural
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I’d stick to 3 -4 bullet points per exp

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5 then 2, 2, 2 looks odd

gilded gorge
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edu at bottom weird

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u go to good school put it at top

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skills at bottom

worthy mural
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^^

gritty ice
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should i try to combine points then?

worthy mural
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I feel like u can remove ur 4th or 5th bullet point and merge it with another

gritty ice
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True

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Thanks

worthy mural
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We use the same stack

gritty ice
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I was doing sysadmin/devops stuff

worthy mural
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Ohh

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How u liking devops seems like ur more interested in embedded

gritty ice
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Not that interested in embedded more like systems programming. But I don’t have enough exp for anyone to want me

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Wbu

worthy mural
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It’s been alright, can be pretty slow sometimes but idm

gritty ice
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what work are u doing?

worthy mural
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Terraform stuff

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And some automation

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Pretty chill but feel like I haven’t done much in my 4 months here

gritty ice
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Why

gritty ice
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seems like a mouthful if i try to combine them

gritty ice
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Wait why

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I haven’t heard that advice before

worthy mural
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Yeah u should try to use 100% of a line or 200%

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Looks more appealing

drifting root
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change all ur job titles to software engineering intern

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And if u really want do like software engineering intern (firmware)

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etc

gritty ice
drifting root
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maybe not that one

gritty ice
drifting root
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i mean dev. ops is swe

gritty ice
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Alr

gritty ice
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@drifting root @worthy mural @latent lake what are we thinking gentlemen

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(skills and education should be swapped i forgor)

gilded gorge
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add sum courses n shiet

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concepts sec too

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ur first exp is still way too bloated

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like no one gonna read allat

gritty ice
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should i cut down to 1 liners?

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or split to 5 points or what

gilded gorge
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imo for a res it should be 3-4 one liners or 2-3 two liners max

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these mfs r sifting thru hundres of apps if they cant get the idea from a glance at the first bulletpoint its already kinda chalked

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dont put technical ass info in ur first bullet either

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put urself in the mind of a recruiter

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u dont need to spam keywords in ur points

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j throw allat in a concepts section at the bottom

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focus on making shit acc readable

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ur gmi tho

worthy mural
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Would add relevant courses too just to fill up a bit of space in education ^^

gritty ice
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second point is quite bloated but not sure how to split it up

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otherwise i'd have 5 bullet points

gilded gorge
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id chill with the names

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think abt it the first mf to read this is gonna be a recruiter

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they dont know what any of ts means

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make it straightforward

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and if an engineer wants to know what u used, they will j ask

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Jessica with comms degree from bama is gonna get a headache from reading this

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thats my opinion tho some people fw the technical jargon slop style resume

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add a concepts section in skills tab and spam all the keywords there

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keep the points actually readable

gritty ice
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so ill just leave them there

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and remove them from the points

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thanks

gilded gorge
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u need more concepts tho

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let me send mine one sec

gritty ice
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kk

gilded gorge
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this should be like an ATS catchall

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Like u wanna hit maxx skill matching score for every job descript here

gritty ice
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i see

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do ur points mention any of that stuff then

gilded gorge
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ill send u an example of one of mine one sec

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so first point is like general overview that any human can understand, engineer or not

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second and third are a bit more technical and descriptive but still no need to namedrop every framework/api/tool etc

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ur roles r more technical than mine so its going to be more jargony which is fine

gritty ice
gilded gorge
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but yea I think simpler is usually better and u can go into all the detail when actally speaking to an engineer

gritty ice
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got it

gilded gorge
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arya put me on to this btw but I have noticed better results like this

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i used to write ode info and was getting perma ghosted

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slimmed it down and response rate went up

gritty ice
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👍

gritty ice
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do u u have a concepts section as well?

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to just spam keywords

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im just concerned that if i dont mention all relevant tools/technologies then they wouldnt think i used them? idk

gritty ice
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do i need to apply the same thing to my other exps?

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kk ty

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anything specifically that can be better

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also why is ur pfp christmas chick yo

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wrong time

gilded gorge
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+1 on everything pogman said

gritty ice
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updated resume if anyone else wants to take a look

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worthy mural
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Looks good