#Looking to see if my expirence is fine
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- Imo you shouldn't highlight both tech and metrics. I think highlighting only metrics is preferable.
- You dont have to mention tech in each bullet point
- Why does your work matter? Why should I care about your monitoring tool? Whats the benefit of data retrieval efficency.
- Dont mention the size of your team
- Code coverage is boring, always make it the last bullet of an experience
- Dont count the number of endpoints, thats a useless metric
- The last bullet of your 2nd experience doesnt make any sense to me
Overall its ok, but a lot of room for improvement
Thanks ill make these changes
Lookin at my expirence would you say its more geared towards backend and data engineering
Its seems data eng and devopsy to me
I would move the 3rd bullet in ur 2nd exp to the top
And reword it
To stronger emphasize the backendyness
Yeah
Yeah i feel like most people just dont say much apprecitate u lookin at it in depth
i made some changes to my first expirence for your third point that you made (Why does your work matter? Why should I care about your monitoring tool? Whats the benefit of data retrieval efficency.) is this meant to be like the impact i had on the buisness?
Yes, my advice was meant to mean to emphasize your business impact more
Damn i gotta think of that cuz im just a code monkey at all my jobs
How does increasing data retrieval efficiency allow for horizontal scaling? If anything, the most obv benefit would be less data transfer.
Almost all your work has business impact
You just need to package and present it nicely
It does but i just really do what was given ill think about it tonight
Ive worked a lot of itnernships which is why i think ive been getting interview even with a resume this bad
Yeah ive been really trying to hone in before school starts on my resume because my internship is pretty much done
The main issue is getting everything to fit when I have 3 internships and 2 projects and a on campus job on my resume
Is your on campus job valuable?
Its just a help desk it job i worked freshman yaer
If you're really struggling for space I would cut it
But imo i would leave it if possible
Yeah im trying to but i would rather take the campus job off than a projec tbh
these are my projects
No users?
Do you have any users for your side proj?
Oh gotcha