#2025 Internships - tear this apart

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prime galleon
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Im not a resume reviewer but afaik theres no point to putting the interest line and you’re better off using that to add a line somewhere else in ur resume. Correct me if im wrong tho

stark flare
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your third bullet point for your startup has a typo

celest shuttle
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altho u probably dont want to put machine learning and ai in there

prime galleon
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ykwim if anything you should be the one to bring it up ig

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your projects should reflect your technical interests and if you have personal ones like baseball or something you just shouldn't put it on there that's how I view it

astral gazelle
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but but but it's one line 😊

celest shuttle
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yea ur projects should

prime galleon
celest shuttle
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hmmm i dont have enough experience to say if it's been useful for me

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but someone i know who has a good amount of interviewing experience has said it's useful

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new topic:

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ur headers should be larger than the project name, company name, etc. beneath them

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at small startup, can u say by how much u decreased turn around time?

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also that same bullet point

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i have no clue what u actually did

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"decreased ... times ... through ... decreasing time"

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"allowing for more informed decision making" is super weak

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"provided access to real time access..." -> I have no clue what technical thing u did here

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for ur bottom two bullet points in small startup, i dont know what technical things u did

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"Participated in Python labs" is weak

stark flare
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when i got my internship offer last year, my manager emailed me saying he was excited to meet me and he had a PS on the bottom talking about one of my interests and how he liked it too

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so i say if u have the room definitely put interests

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people will consider u more human

celest shuttle
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also try to get another title besides "Organization Member"

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pls capitalize "Python"

prime galleon
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Looks good

celest shuttle
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yes that's what I'm talking about

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i think it becomes more readable and easier on the eyes if u do that

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ill take a look at projects later if u'd like