You have some really impressive experience but I feel like you’re underselling it tbh.
You talk about an ML model you used, what kind? How much data did you process; the trades, were they HF/Low latency? Maybe give a little bit more in detail than just leveraged quant analysis. Obviously don’t go around giving up ip but maybe a little more?
Under HPC internship I would get rid of the first bullet, I had smth similar in mine but it’s a kind of statement you can move to an awards section or something. See if you can maybe add something else to talk about. You also mention efficiency improvement, by how much?
I would also get rid of that last line, you’re submitting applications, ofc you’re looking for roles lol.
Good work overall though Godspeed 