Junior looking for fall 2024 Internship

[unkempt oxide]

This is what I currently have for fall, tear it apart please.

[terse parcel]

What's this incoming software intern stuff? Why's it there?

[unkempt oxide]

for fall

[terse parcel]

If you're looking for a Fall position, why are you listing a Fall position?

[unkempt oxide]

im looking for an internship for the fall, not summer

[terse parcel]

Oh

Months

Kinda weird to look for a fall internship immediately after your summer internship? I don't really get it. Hows that work?

[unkempt oxide]

Money + exp

[terse parcel]

How's that an internship then? Is your degree done?

Are you taking classes in the fall?

A little wordy at times; "Redesigned and reimplemented a relational database... ". Just say: "Redesigned an Oracle database and reimplemented SQL queries to improve query performance and reduce data retrieval time"

[unkempt oxide]

Co-Op would be a better word for it

[terse parcel]

I imagine the summer internship will work against your ability to land a Fall internship.

Also, did your full stack developer intern really end in May 2024?

Overlapping the other position?

Overall it's a good resume, just a few small places to sharpen up phrasing.

"with features like cross-platform". I don't like the use of "like" here. Try: "providing" or "including" or something for features

[unkempt oxide]

1 is full stack SD is just and internship extension where im working 10 hrs, and backend is a Co-Op so it counts as a class, but its work exp?

you get paid for co-ops

[terse parcel]

It's just confusing trying to figure out the dates and overlaps.

[unkempt oxide]

im doing both at the same time

[unkempt oxide]

any other points as to where in particular?

[terse parcel]

I gave a few examples already, but: