#Junior looking for fall 2024 Internship

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unkempt oxide
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This is what I currently have for fall, tear it apart please.

terse parcel
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What's this incoming software intern stuff? Why's it there?

unkempt oxide
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for fall

terse parcel
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If you're looking for a Fall position, why are you listing a Fall position?

unkempt oxide
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im looking for an internship for the fall, not summer

terse parcel
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Oh

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Months

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Kinda weird to look for a fall internship immediately after your summer internship? I don't really get it. Hows that work?

terse parcel
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Are you taking classes in the fall?

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A little wordy at times; "Redesigned and reimplemented a relational database... ". Just say: "Redesigned an Oracle database and reimplemented SQL queries to improve query performance and reduce data retrieval time"

unkempt oxide
terse parcel
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I imagine the summer internship will work against your ability to land a Fall internship.

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Also, did your full stack developer intern really end in May 2024?

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Overlapping the other position?

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Overall it's a good resume, just a few small places to sharpen up phrasing.

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"with features like cross-platform". I don't like the use of "like" here. Try: "providing" or "including" or something for features

unkempt oxide
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you get paid for co-ops

terse parcel
unkempt oxide
unkempt oxide
terse parcel
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I gave a few examples already, but: