#2024 New Grad Aiming for Swe AnyFeedback welcome

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smoky sluice
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2024 New Grad Aiming for Swe AnyFeedback welcome

hidden basin
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Templates fine, at high level, maybe just italicize the titles, a little too much bolding. I’d prefer to put the title first in bold, and company second italicized

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Looks like you hit the thesaurus or GPT to lead off these paragraphs

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Revitalized? That made me laugh

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Nothing in first job bullet says what -you- did.

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(Read my comments on other resumes, lead with tech )

smoky sluice
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even for PM roles?

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or are you referring to BB?

hidden basin
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As an intern, the impact statements aren’t terribly interesting. ‘Led the implementation…. ‘, I stopped reading at ‘led’

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Your title says SWE

smoky sluice
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right... but the poistion I did was PM... I am looking at SWE though

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as PM I do not touch code

hidden basin
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Then talk about engineering process, emphasize stuff like customer feedback, design, requirements analysis, quality assurance, etc. the impact of your on work is something fr the interview, not important for a swe resume. I would shorten the pm billets to one liners

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But all the jobs together make you seem very non technical

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(As written)

smoky sluice
hidden basin
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same thing, how far do I need to read to find out your stack? If you wrote code?

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First bb bullet says nothing

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Mind you, I certainly won’t (and didn’t) read an entire sentence

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I see ‘streamlined .. business processes’, and checked out of that bullet

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I prefer: Using (stack), built (product) for (purpose)… and optionally impact at end

smoky sluice
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well in Blackberry that was what i did/ what the tool does it's basically Service Now but built internally by Blackberry

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so using C#/Angular built said tools for streamlining business requirements...?

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something to that effect...?

hidden basin
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Yah, just think of a screener as a very lazy person who will look quickly at a resume and read the first few words of your first xp bullet

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If they like it, they might look at second and third bullet

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An interviewer might read the full sentence, but you first have to pass the screen