just wondering if there are any obvious improvements i could/should make. plz don't be too mean :)
(theres more padding on the top/bottom i just had to scroll to get the screenshot)
#New Grad May 2024, 2 internships (one company), not really many projects
dense epoch
rugged dust
I would take out chess club and add more bullets to your internship
dense epoch
I would take out chess club and add more bullets to your internship
yea that makes sense but for my last one idrk what else to write, that was really the only thing i was tasked with
dense epoch
advent of code as a project is crazy btw
yea i dont really have anything ive done outside of class ¯_(ツ)_/¯
thanks lol
def a cool experience but not really career impactful
red jay
I would take out chess club and add more bullets to your internship
real tyler1
hollow sigil
would take out extra curriculars(Baseball and chess)
Would have more quanitifying metrics.
Can get rid of VSCode, microsoft office
Projects seem weak. Wouldn't have 4 - 5 bullet points for course level projects
this is just my opinion, don't have to change if you're confident with your resume.
dense epoch
Projects seem weak. Wouldn't have 4 - 5 bullet points for course level projects
yea they def are. that project had a lot going on though
gotta work on something but ideas+motivation are hard
ty for help
if i was confident i wouldnt be asking for help lol
cedar ermine
imo you need to really gas up your internship exp and make that the focal point of your resume. find it hard to believe that in 3 months you were only tasked with refactoring some email scripts
dense epoch
there is some more i could write about that but wording it to be clear and concise would be kinda difficult
but overall that was really all i did, the "august" was the last week where i was told "yea theres not much for you to do"
hollow sigil
yea they def are. that project had a lot going on though
"learned conflict resolution, team building", "designed synthesis and posters" are not needed i guess
dense epoch
oh i thought you meant the social media one, yea makes sense to remove those
hollow sigil
Also, one full sentence is used to describe the tech stack in each of your projects. takes a lot of space
hollow sigil
imo you need to really gas up your internship exp and make that the focal point ...
yeah i agree with this, internship exp needs to beefed up more as it adds more value than course level projects. Try making it your primary point of focus.
dense epoch
really appreciate the help, i'll try that tomorrow or over the weekend
this is the result after doing my school's resume help thing lol
cedar ermine
there is some more i could write about that but wording it to be clear and conci...
my advice would be to think back to any projects you were assigned to and use chat gpt as a starting point to create resume bullets out of them. Ideally, you'd want at least 3 solid bullets that show some sort of impact for each internship
dense epoch
ye
dense epoch
there is some more i could write about that but wording it to be clear and conci...
i'll prob use chat gpt to try to word this if i cant figure it out
realistically, i could put that my internships were june-july bc the august for each was a week. prob wont do that tho
dense epoch
new bullets for my first internship (is 4 too many / should i remove the last?)
●Conducted thorough, regular testing of the service, ensuring seamless integration and maintaining functionality
●Developed strategic solution for Kafka message limit for emails with large attachments using GCP
●Collaborated with InfoSec to ensure secure handling of sensitive data```
(last is basically "i met with the guy to get the api key that i needed and then used vault and stuff")