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celest gorge Nov 15, 2023, 1:20 PM

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@thorny sandal @strange nexus @cunning haven

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i took all of your advice, please let me know what else can be improved

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thank you

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im also planning on making a separate resume for swe internships that aren't iOS since this one is pretty tailored to iOS roles

strange nexus Nov 15, 2023, 4:06 PM

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only thing i can think of is recruiters might not know what bereal. is

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and betsocial doesn’t make any sense

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what is it

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i guess it’s in the name but it’s not immediately obvious what it’s supposed to do

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is it a twitter account for betting

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on sports

celest gorge Nov 15, 2023, 4:07 PM

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yeah it tweeted out the bets that i would place

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so once i placed it, it would tweet it within 5 mins

celest gorge Nov 15, 2023, 4:08 PM

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strange nexus only thing i can think of is recruiters might not know what bereal. is

any ideas on how to fix that? should i explain it instead of saying bereal clone?

strange nexus Nov 15, 2023, 4:09 PM

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i mean u can keep the words bereal

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but say it’s a social media app

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maybe just make the name “kozy social media”

celest gorge Nov 15, 2023, 4:11 PM

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strange nexus maybe just make the name “kozy social media”

better?

strange nexus Nov 15, 2023, 4:12 PM

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i think u can just change the name bc u don’t wanna make a new line for just a couple words

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but yeah looks good

celest gorge Nov 15, 2023, 4:12 PM

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strange nexus i think u can just change the name bc u don’t wanna make a new line for just a c...

okie dokie

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ah fuck

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i forgot the word clone

strange nexus Nov 15, 2023, 4:13 PM

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it was in the original

celest gorge Nov 15, 2023, 4:13 PM

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yeah forgot to add it back

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just did it now

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thorny sandal Nov 15, 2023, 5:16 PM

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I wouldn't say "clone"

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makes it sound like you just copied it with no original thought

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overall mega improvement from last iteration

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