#HELP ME! HELP ME!

1 messages · Page 1 of 1 (latest)

restive night
#

first point is too long, you could do something like
"Led development of a comprehensive scheduling feature using React, Typescript, Node.js and MongoDB to manage non-operational periods and caused{whatever impact}"

#

2nd point is good, but maybe do Optimized x feature by doing y resulting in 80% reduction in z

#

also put it at the end since its ur shortest point

#

3rd point is baller

#

4th point find some impact

#

5th feels like filler

burnt sleet
#

I would say that the length of your points shows inconsistency like some are bigger than others, try to make them as consistent as possible

restive night
quaint frost
#

buump