#which version is better?

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hearty bluff
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right version 100%

sand lotus
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The response rate for right version is garbage lol

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that’s why I’m thinking of switching

hexed bane
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right version by a lot lol

hearty bluff
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maybe bold some metrics and technologies instead

hexed bane
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Show full resume

sand lotus
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@hexed bane

hexed bane
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Projects holding you back imo

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Also “web systems” sounds weird

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I’d scrap that

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Also I’d cut down your Languages section a bit

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No way ur proficient in all those

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Kinda surprised ur not getting anything w AWS tho

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Ur second project is prob fine?

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Idk about chess tho. I would replace that

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Ur sometimes fitting in too much info into a single bullet. Like rebuilding api reference wiki using Scrum

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Scrum isn’t directly related to the bullet

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I’d say make your bullets a bit more concise so there’s a clear purpose for each one instead of trying to pack keywords in

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Case in point would be ur first bullet for ur exp under AWS

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It’s too jam packed, too much going on

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Dashboards reviewed over 2x everyday. So like 3 times? Or

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That bullet can be worded more convincingly

sand lotus
hexed bane
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Doesn’t have to be the class name

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Just what was the main content

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I personally don’t even know what web systems are

sand lotus
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mmm

hexed bane
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Overall impression is that the bullet need to be more concise/directed

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Having AWS is huge on your resume though

sand lotus
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yeah idk callbacks this cycle is garbage

hexed bane
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And also consider doing a more “real world applicable” project to replace your Chess project

sand lotus
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i had a better response rate last year with no aws lol

hexed bane
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Good that you’re using stuff like Flask multi threading etc

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But I think the end goal of the project has limited real world scope

hexed bane
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2023 trash.

sand lotus
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yeah some of the bullets are pretty wordy

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thx