#1 year of experience @ big tech. Review my resume please

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wintry solstice
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recommend putting professional experience over academic experience.

edgy thistle
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Hi @untold skiff can you go over it if you have the time. Thanks!

untold skiff
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Microsoft:

  • "unify data for outlook"? not sure what that means I don't have any context
  • "Currently" is capitalized after a comma
  • Have you done any work in the past year? Just a hackathon?? Nothing else? ๐Ÿ˜…
  • what the heck is "on-prem" support for outlook? I can kind of guess but it's so vague, how do you expect readers to know?
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I think everything else looks good ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿผ

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The Emirates bullet point could use some metrics about how much data you were working with

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last thing about the looks, the big margins and the big section titles make your resume look awkward and empty

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  • put phone/email/github on one line
  • shrink margins to narrow
  • decrease size of section headers

and it will look better

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I would blend your academic and professional into "Work Experience"

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I don't see the benefit in separating them

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and it's better to avoid any conflict with ATS bots