put experience above projects
#US Citizen, complete ghost, please review resume
keen spindle
mental delta
yeah i’m not reading all that 💀
untold temple
bruh
mental delta
3 whole lines for single bullet is too inflating - 2 whole lines for a single bullet point at most
keen spindle
bro posted the constitution
sharp dagger
ur not passing resume screens cus ats gets bored and gives up 💀
mental delta
genuinely the experience/work history is not the problem it’s legitimately how much fluff there is
you’d literally be passing 90% of screens after cutting down
untold temple
so like you didn't even get pass a single resume screen?
sharp dagger
im working on an oa
after that
i can help you more
your amount of experience is actually solid asf id say
but lines like this
the actual specifics of time
really dont matter
so much as the % decrease
frail tusk
how you not passing resume screen
TIP?
damn congrats
????
Dropbox was auto I thought
sharp dagger
unnecessary they dont care that its f1000 either they know it or they dont
frail tusk
did you get ctc oa
sharp dagger
theres a lot of like
untold temple
It was kinda random idk
sharp dagger
basic overexplanation
that really is unnecessary
it doesnt matter if its no name u have a leg up on the ppl who are inflating numbers
u are a competitive t5 candidate
frail tusk
did you get ctc oa
@tribal jasper
sharp dagger
u dont have 5x faang its fine most people dont
frail tusk
Did u apply
sharp dagger
also u go to MIT ? thats like t2 if not 1 😭
keen spindle
congrats on berkely
sharp dagger
LOOL
untold temple
lol
sharp dagger
and shit like
LayoutLM (multi-modal document visual qeustion answering system)
so unnecessary word vomit
no ats is looking for that
no recruiter knows what that means
untold temple
actually is this resume not passing ats or recruiter
sharp dagger
also @tribal jasper if u arent hitting up fairs u should
once this becomes more readable
this is the least readable resume ive ever seen
frail tusk
like Purdue is middle of nowhere but compared to cal polytechnic which is kinda mid they are comparable in terms of recruiting due to pure location difference
sharp dagger
its stacked actually
keen spindle
yeah in person especially this would not fly
frail tusk
this is the least readable resume ive ever seen
😭
sharp dagger
not necessarily
for all your insane amount of keywords u lowkey are missing some important ones i think
not 100% sure
but
your keywords get very specifi
frail tusk
Is it possible to write all the keywords in like size 0.1 font
sharp dagger
there are 0 keywords in these 3 lines EXCEPT AWS
this 2 lines has Jira Agile Scrum CI/CD which is good
docker and python r take ncare of by ur tech skills
in this u dont even hit RESTful API just REST APIs
frail tusk
@tribal jasper you should use the format of did ( ) using (framework) to (impact)
sharp dagger
u only hit LLM here
u only hit AWS here (youve already hit it)
nah
i focus on readability
and i keyword dump at the end
ill show u
this hits every keyword i care about
but i also have the added bonus of not wanting to do front end so not rly needing to include shit like AWS
or just not caring abt web frameworks
u should have multiple res with different keywords that appeal to different people
like
if ur applying ai/ml
u should have like
projects are
like this
1 line each if possible, simple and to the point
and dont overbold
exp is more like this
a bit more expansion but still trying to keep uniform
and like
you
have so much exp
its THE focus of ur resume
theres no rason for ur DMS to take 4 lines
reason*
dms project
also exp above projects
ur projects still matter less
than exp
no name doesnt mean its useless
they dont only care about who you didi t for
what you actually did is important
and ur school and coursework are a good qualifier
to your capabilities
sure but that doesnt make your projects matter more than ur exp
so take away from ur projects and put it towards exp
it doesnt matter if ur exp isnt faang its still more important
and if u can condense ur project to 2 bullets without losing too much information
you can either a) add another project or b) expand on exp
yes
go thru each pullet
see if u can refactor as much as possible
make notes on the ones you have trouble with
leave them
do it for everything you can
then bring it back
and ping me
sleek trail
immediate impression: way way too condensed together and an eye-sore. I'm sure your bullet points are great
Is the actual bottom of the page? keep within margins
Replace "spearheaded", "Working on", "Utilized", "Strategically" as first words
Also you have a lot of experience so IDK why you'd have Projects above Experience
if that's a big deal and you want to show that then I'd have a lot more bullet points
Your accomplishment was that you were selected
by...
Yes
This is kind of a buzzwordy sentence
A lot of these sound ChatGPT written
"pinpointing and rectifying" "bolstered system scalability" "spearheaded optimization" lots of words but no numbers
don't have three lines for a bullet point imo, this can be directly converted into a 2 and 1 liner
In general, reword with accomplishment at the beginning
"Optimized textual and visual data analysis by strategically exploring fine-tuned LLMs..."
Based on your actual stats (target school + multiple internships), you should getting plenty of interviews. I don't think your resume is terribly written enough to not get OAs, although it could definitely be improved. Market is tough
More than anything, it's an eyesore though. Maybe recruiters just dont' want to look at it. Work on just getting the highlights of everything, and keep it mind there's a top/left bias
i.e., the first part of each sentence matters the most, and the things higher up on the resume matter more
With your new whitespace, I'd format "Skills" like most tech ppl do btw
i.e., in their own section with "Languages", "Libraries", "Frameworks", etc.
not under school
Sure
Also, your date format is inconsistent:
MM/YYYY and Month Year
tardy niche
not sure imo, as long as company name there it should be good