#need honest opinions on format and resume!

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mystic lotus
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Some dude told me that this resume will never work and I should use canva. He told me it’s 2023 and there’s so many resources out there. I just need your honest opinion

mystic lotus
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Please check it

zinc loom
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customize your LInkedIN username to make it much shorter and your first and last name if possible

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and have all the contact info on one line

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It's not called this

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don't have multiple |'s , just have a comma separating all different languages/libraries used in project

mystic lotus
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Alrighty

zinc loom
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none of these really matter

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Why is your education at the bottom?

mystic lotus
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I’ll get rid of them

mystic lotus
zinc loom
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How do you measure 100% accuracy in "style"?

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is it that you got a 100 on the project from your teacher?

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does this actually say "the University" or is this anonymized?

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Rewrite many bullet points with XYZ format, such as this

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Spring Boot

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PyTorch

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MySQL

mystic lotus
mystic lotus
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Also education at the top?

zinc loom
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how many?

zinc loom
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don't have lines that go <25% of the total length, either shorten the line or make it longer with more details/metrics

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and you don't even need to mention that anyway. if you did, capitalize Eclipse

mystic lotus
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Got it

zinc loom
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Word salad

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Say

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"Enhanced [metric] by 60% by regex [details]"

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I don't know what "performance" means though, how is that measured? And how was the code optimized? more details

mystic lotus
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Yessir

zinc loom
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the + after 1000 is redunant

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more specifics please

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same performance question -- how are you "enhancing" it by 99%

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remove "to increasing training set" and reword

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tell us which geographical areas

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I assume Dash should be capitalized

mystic lotus
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Yes

zinc loom
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come up with more descriptive title

mystic lotus
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I’ll make the changes

zinc loom
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same for the other two

mystic lotus
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Sure thing

zinc loom
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said this for another point but these lines are too short

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Make 3rd bullet point longer, and either lengthen the first two or make them one line

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misspelling

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it's fine if you consistently end bullet points with periods, but it's more standard not to

mystic lotus
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Yea I was thinking of not ending it with periods and I’ll do so after the modifications

zinc loom
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Add libraries you used in projects to Skills

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there's no Pandas or Scikit-Learn

mystic lotus
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Those are libraries

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I’ll add it to skills then

zinc loom
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Yes that's what I'm saying

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they're missing from here

mystic lotus
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Got it got it

zinc loom
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a lot of people are sticklers about this, but never say utilizing

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JWT authentication

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Completely rewrite this bullet point

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Every verb should be past tense

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we don't need to know which IDE you used

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don't say "etc."

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don't admit the website is simple

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and XYZ method:

Built an e-commerce website in collaboration with...

mystic lotus
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Yessir!