#need honest opinions on format and resume!
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Please check it
customize your LInkedIN username to make it much shorter and your first and last name if possible
and have all the contact info on one line
It's not called this
don't have multiple |'s , just have a comma separating all different languages/libraries used in project
Alrighty
I’ll get rid of them
Someone told me to have experiences in the top
How do you measure 100% accuracy in "style"?
is it that you got a 100 on the project from your teacher?
does this actually say "the University" or is this anonymized?
Rewrite many bullet points with XYZ format, such as this
Spring Boot
PyTorch
MySQL
There was a simulation that matched with my output during my embedded design project and it would output the exact results
how many?
Yes, definitely
don't have lines that go <25% of the total length, either shorten the line or make it longer with more details/metrics
and you don't even need to mention that anyway. if you did, capitalize Eclipse
Got it
Word salad
Say
"Enhanced [metric] by 60% by regex [details]"
I don't know what "performance" means though, how is that measured? And how was the code optimized? more details
Yessir
the + after 1000 is redunant
MySQL
more specifics please
same performance question -- how are you "enhancing" it by 99%
remove "to increasing training set" and reword
tell us which geographical areas
I assume Dash should be capitalized
Yes
come up with more descriptive title
I’ll make the changes
same for the other two
Sure thing
said this for another point but these lines are too short
Make 3rd bullet point longer, and either lengthen the first two or make them one line
misspelling
NumPy
it's fine if you consistently end bullet points with periods, but it's more standard not to
Yea I was thinking of not ending it with periods and I’ll do so after the modifications
Got it got it
a lot of people are sticklers about this, but never say utilizing
JWT authentication
Completely rewrite this bullet point
Every verb should be past tense
we don't need to know which IDE you used
don't say "etc."
don't admit the website is simple
and XYZ method:
Built an e-commerce website in collaboration with...
Yessir!