Spent a week drafting this for summer 2024 intenmrhsips.ROAST

[silk grail]

what’s happening with your languages? highlight and extra comma

check all your comma spacing especially tools and frameworks

why 10k dollars and not $10,000 or $10k

same for percents, why full word?

“15 percent increase in overall academic performance” is unclear to me - average gpa increase? specific class section improved more than normal?

ubereats clone project first bullet point needs a proofread

second bullet point makes no sense to me and tense is wrong

honestly run this through grammarly, your punctuation and spacing is not standard

Node.js

“built features like” is not great, too unspecific and you only list two things

club second bullet point Organised should be organised (not capitalized)

if you’re american, “organised” is not standard - should be “organized”

“other logistical details” is not a strong ending

[lone radish]

@silk grail this the second resume I wanted to roast but you beat me to it 😪

[silk grail]

feel free to add anything i missed lol

but im procrastinating cs homework by doing this instead

[mighty meteor]

dont end a list with a comma

spacing isn't consistent, have a space after all commas. you mentioend Docker twice

Redo this header

10k dollars $10,000

50 percent 50%

Three lines in COMPANY 1 are too short

sounds made up. proof?

reword

start with action verbs

too short

I'm not sure what "e-commerce application" adds -- dont' you just mean Amazon? I'm confused

15percent 15%

20percent 20%

JobApplication Job Application

Lines 1 and 3 look short

show, don't tell

unnecessary capitalization