#Canadian sophomore seeking winter 2024 internships. Thanks!
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Thanks for taking a look! I've changed that line to this now:
@tired rain wondering if you could take a look as well? i noticed you had a lot of good feedback, thanks 🙂
I think u have too many jargon and impact points for ex.
u just drop a lot of tech without rlly talking about what u did
like me saying i built a website in react / tailwind
but not saying: oh, i built three pages with responsive design, managed state thro xyz etc
Like ur first exp for ex. just a lot of i cut the time down by 80% or i did this by x%
but it means nothing
cause there no relative measurement
more important to focus on how u did it
thus as the other resume reviews i responded to id focus on what u did and how u did it
Just a random question but does anyone know why people tend to not show what company they worked at? I understand the name and school part are for privacy reasons but does that also apply to companies as well, if so why..?
I was trying to post my resume on here for review and was confused as to what i should cover and i shouldnt cover..
U can do whatever u want to expose lol. Sometimes u can search the company date / name and or even the sentence itself and find ppl on linkedin like that
if they dont wanna dox themselves
Ahh icic
also u could be exposing ur location
if they are all in seattle for ex
or you working at ur school
Mm understandable thanks for the clarification
Thanks for all this feedback! So basically i need to focus less on these metrics/technologies and more on the details of what i did?
Yea the company i was at is quite small and it would be pretty easy to find my name based off the company
Yup - bc ultimately teams / companies if it reaches a human to read will care a lot more about the technical details and how u did it vs an impact
id care more someone can do a fullstack web app for ex and write about the process of what they did vs they made an app with 50K users
Everyone in your program has the presidents scholarship of distinction so it doesn’t mean much