#please be honest with me i am trying to get a ng '24 offer :)

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bleak axle
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bullet points for jp morgan are weak

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also change up the format, im having a hard ass time differentiating the company name from your role

ex:
Role (pretend this is space till end of page) place
company name (pretend this is space till end of page) date

role - company - place (pretend this is space till end of page) date

idk if you see what im getting at here

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also did you work at meta or insta? thats confusing, you dont want someone looking at your resume to be confused.

docbot exp sounds cool af, but pls dont use python/c++. did you use both? just pyth? just c++? again, im not supposed to be confused looking at a resume, its supposed to be clear.

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and maybe im blind but where is the skills section?

high silo
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no one is going to look at your projects if you have bigges in your work experience lol overall looks good

bleak axle
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good on OP for getting into big name, but they need to play there cards correctly

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also unless you are comfortable being grilled on some of those technologies, DONT PUT IT SKILLS. For example, this week i got grilled on Docker and springboot. i answered all questions, but man was i on a fucking hot seat

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so unless you know for a fact you can do it on the job and know it well enough to be grilled on it, dont include it (im saying this because you have assembly, and if you get grilled on assembly, you are cooked)

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also clean up your skills. saying you know backend development wont help me at all. show me you know that through projects and exp

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1 and 3 can be put into better words, 2, needs to be redone

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i want to know how those new endpoints helped

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example

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i created a new endpoint for our web app that brought in 27% user retention (confirmed by our internal google analytics tool)

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idk if enpoint is a good word for it

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feature?

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idk it was an article/new reasearch article thingy majig

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basically STAR method (keep in mind, YOU DONT ALWAYS NEED A METRIC THATS NUMERATED(im tired of seeing that advice be through around here), you can show that "hey i did this cool thing and it led to this" without a most of the time made up metric)

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as for this, no. just redo it

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an example:

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(you dont need to have all of these, its just an example)

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happens