Am I just bad

[crude orchid]

A few pointers

Actually no pointers. Your resume is pretty good

The first experience’s points are weak

[tame wing]

Ah yeah, it’s cuz i just started the internship so havent done anything yet

are there any better placeholders you’d recommend? maybe even list it as “incoming” for now or nah?

[crude orchid]

What type of jobs are you applying for?

[tame wing]

Summer 24 SWE internships

sorry shouldve mentioned that earlier

[tame wing]

bump 🥲

[toxic scaffold]

jeez, bro goes to yale. how notable are the companies for your two most recent internships?

[tame wing]

First one is mid size edtech company but not well known, recent one is a more known company but definitely not super notable

[vapid grail]

This is very solid! Have you not made it past resume screens?

[tame wing]

Thank you! It's weird, I haven't been rejected from anywhere nor have I moved on...just kinda ghosted lol

[vapid grail]

If anything, I’d say add another bullet point to the second intern experience and consolidate elsewhere, maybe in a project that you feel is less relevant

Maybe also have diversity in word choice, I see more than one “designed” and “developed”. You could possibly frame what you did in a different way

[vapid grail]

Have you done any OAs? Wishing you the best!

[tame wing]

Thanks for the advice! I'll try those changes out and see what happens

and yeah I've done a crap ton of auto OAs (Roblox, Databricks, IBM, Goldman Sachs, etc...) pretty much all the big ones so far, but nothin

[vapid grail]

Ohhh I definitely understand that. Have u looked into/are u interested in JPMC CFG? The hackerrank wasn’t bad at all and they don’t take too long to respond. Does your summer ‘23 internship do returns?

[tame wing]

oh yeah i applied to CFG the day it came out, got rejected tho lol

and yeah i did get a return from my summer '23 internship, im hoping for something more prominent though

[tame wing]

^ Updated resume

[leaden gust]

mind if i ask for an anonymized vers of your current resume? ;o

[tame wing]

yeah ill anonymize and send over later today