#Roast my resume please(going into junior year, switched majors)

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wise sail
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applying to internships

tranquil swan
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there are a lot to be said for this one

wise sail
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please make me cry

tranquil swan
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first off, each bulletpoint sounds like an elementary kid wrote it in 5 seconds

wise sail
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go hard

tranquil swan
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use chatgpt to make it more advanced

wise sail
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bet

tranquil swan
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how did you ensure program had no bugs found

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did you do unit testing for Java?

wise sail
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i did multiple amounts of money

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and they all worked

tranquil swan
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not good enough

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you need to do unit testing for edge cases but that's just programming not resume

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how did you quantitatively measure "better readability and faster outputs by 12%"? You def need to word this better.

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moving on to username generator

wise sail
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taking hella notes, i really appreciate it

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ill remove that since it doesnt really add much

tranquil swan
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first sentence def need more clarification

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you threw a bunch of verbs without proving anything

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that's bad

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"ensuring high quality result" be more specific. what did you do and how do you prove it

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100% is bad for resume.

cyan orchid
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In extracurriculars your date spilled over to the next line

tranquil swan
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You def can get huge help from chatgpb

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gpt

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ask them to give you some recommendations

cyan orchid
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Also donโ€™t include fast food stuff ๐Ÿ˜‹

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Try coming up with more stuff to put in work experience

wise sail
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best burger assembler tho

tranquil swan
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highway identifier: first bullepoint is way too long. ask chatgpt to make it shorter and more clear

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second point also has same issue "working and bug-free program with great readability" There is no such thing as that without testing. There is a very popular testing tool called JUnit testing in Java

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use that for future reference

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all the projects overall sound very simple

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it would be really difficult for you to get a summer 2024 internship

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but fall 2024 internships open up around February

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work on projects

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go on udemy or something. watch video on some skills like react.js or anything. Make projects that requires more technologies and more time

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a project of HTML and CSS is not enough for College internships for sure.

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do you have any project from those hackathons you participated?

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put them in your project section

wise sail
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yes yes I will do that as well

tranquil swan
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be more descriptive with your extracurriculars

wise sail
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Im probably just gonna remove the simple projects and work on more like you said

tranquil swan
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remove fast food places

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no one cares about that especially when you are incoming junior

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work on projects that require time and dedication

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You have a long way to go, but you def can do it. I hope I was helpful and wish you the best luck ๐Ÿ™‚

wise sail
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It was definitely enlightening man, I really appreciate the harsh reality of what I still lack but I will push my self. Thank you Pog ๐Ÿ™

grizzled vessel
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No black background

zinc cairn
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use jakes

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white background

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make sure u use pdf in final version

zinc cairn
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for having 5 projects fee;s like your "technical skills" is kinda lacking

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u should talk more abt like