#2023 grad look for first job, please let me know how to improve my resume

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warped sleet
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Use Jakes resume

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On overleaf

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Less "Used" maybe?

leaden nebula
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Looks good, idk how parseable your header is 👀

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Missing a technology/languages section

little wave
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thanks for the feedback guys

indigo ginkgo
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bro what are these bullet points...

little wave
indigo ginkgo
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everything

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they're quite weak

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for example

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the network analysis one

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"by being well versed" lol what?

little wave
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^^ I mean that what I learned in that internship

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But yeah I'll look for better words

indigo ginkgo
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nah you need to rethink the purpose behind bullet points

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it's to show impact

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what did your network analysis achieve?

little wave
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I see

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How about the project section?

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The alzhiemer's one was done with a company but it wasn't an internship so I didn't include it in work experience

indigo ginkgo
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much better than experience section

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again don't bold like that maybe only bold tech stacks and languages

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it's distracting

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For your bullet points try to follow a consistent format like for example the Google one: "Accomplished [X] as measured by [Y], by doing [Z]."

little wave
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Makes sense, thanks for the recomendations

eternal lark
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If you want good bullet points sign up for the wonsulting resume ai

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You get 10 coins

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And it makes some good bullet points for you

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Just put the role and then approximately what you did