#Roast My Resume 🎅🏽, I'm a Junior looking for summer 2024 🫡

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vagrant ember
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Am i cooked?

fading sand
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its over 😔

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joking, but a little touching up

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like for one, tech section. i dont need a paragraph on what you think you are experienced in. like for example, someone says they are highly skilled in java. but if i ask a question like whats an optional, and they dont know it, thats to me is a red flag.

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look at some other resumes posted here and get take inspiration for that section

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also your most recent work exp, is over shadowing alot of the other exp you have

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if i were to take a 8-10 second glance i would think you only had 1 exp

vagrant ember
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thanks for the advice, I'm not really sure what to do about the work experience one

fading sand
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also why the hell are yall restricting chatgpt?

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i use it like google

vagrant ember
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nah we're using azure open ai services

fading sand
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(not for actual code tho)

vagrant ember
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to prevent company data release

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it's supposed to be security

fading sand
vagrant ember
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yea nah I appreciate the advice, i was just given a lot more stuff to do in this internship versus literally everything else haha

fading sand
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for your most recent exp, take your BEST points and add that

vagrant ember
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I'll try to remove some stuff

fading sand
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cause imo, its a little too long

vagrant ember
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but would it make any difference

fading sand
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and update the others

vagrant ember
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if I also worked last fall

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at that company, so the experience was split among those terms

fading sand
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like a year over recent

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not really a year, more 6 months

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but you get my point

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you have 3 INTERNSHIPS, you will be fine.

vagrant ember
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got it got it, and would you say I should just remove one of the internships and replace it with aproject or smth?

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I feel like I might be getting fucked by ATS

fading sand
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NONONO, remove some of the context in the most recent one

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its too much

vagrant ember
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alright bet, would it be cool if I updated it and sent the resume back in here?

fading sand
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yeah

vagrant ember
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thank you mayne

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I'll be back soon

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🫡

fading sand
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o7

indigo plaza
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I feel like the first work exp has too many points
My school's guideline is no more than 3-4 points per section

vagrant ember
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@fading sand I changed a couple of sections and I switched the order, I also removed some stuff from the most recent internship; hopefully it looks a little better

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vagrant ember
indigo plaza
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Nice that looks better

vagrant ember
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top experience might still be a little long, but I feel like the distribution of bullet points is a little better

indigo plaza
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Also I feel like it would be neater if relevant courses went along with education

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Cause the ed section also looks empty

fading sand
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this

vagrant ember
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interesting

fading sand
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THIS IS PEEK

vagrant ember
fading sand
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if you have a github and the project is on github, replace it with the date on your project.(personal preference tho, but you can keep it like this if you like it better)

vagrant ember
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actually, I'm thinking about switching the project with something else, I'll put that on github, and not sure what I'll do for the resume, but I might stick with just the date tbh

vagrant ember
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thank you guys for all the help

fading sand
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fill some of that white space at the bottom

vagrant ember
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I could but the thing is, I'll only be able to put like one bullet point for the other project

fading sand
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but overall this looks good thumbs_up

vagrant ember
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feel like that would be lackluster

vagrant ember
fading sand
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oh wait

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tools section

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remove the ides part, specify what version of aws and azure you know (unless its a top secret version you arent allowed to talk about much.), and seperate languages from frameworks/libs

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and relevant courses go under education

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almost missed that

vagrant ember
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oh shit wait so I shouldn't have relevant courses down there?

fading sand
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nope

vagrant ember
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damn @indigo plaza my fault you were right

fading sand
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usually they go under education

vagrant ember
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like this?

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or is that too congested

vagrant ember
indigo plaza
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maybe add some margin after 2025

fading sand
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bulleting it would help

indigo plaza
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if you can

indigo plaza
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that's what my resume looks like

vagrant ember
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that is smart, my dumbass thought you meant each course to be bulleted

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💀

fading sand
vagrant ember
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btw when you say what version of AWS, Azure, what do you mean? My main point was just to mention that I can work with cloud services

fading sand
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AWS and AZURE are not specified because they are private versions im not allowed to talk about

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but are similar to ec2 and lambda

vagrant ember
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I see I see, so you're saying the specific services within Azure and AWS?

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so like if I use lambda, or blob storage, or cloudwatch or smth like that

fading sand
fading sand
vagrant ember
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right right, so the specific tools gotcha gotcha

fading sand
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can be specified like this

ex:
AWS(lambda, s3 buckets, something), Azure (something, container thing that i forget the name of)

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or

vagrant ember
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that makes sense

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AWS and Azure is super vague haha

fading sand
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AWS lambda, AWS s3 buckets, AWS something , Azure something, Azure container thing that i forget the name of

vagrant ember
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I will do that, alright I'm gonna go finish my internship work for the day, I will send a hopefully final version later today

fading sand
vagrant ember
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thank you again for the help

fading sand
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o7

vagrant ember
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Alright fixed the skills section and moved relevant coursework to the top; does this look alright? @fading sand @indigo plaza

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fading sand
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but other than that looks good

vagrant ember
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Bet bet

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This is the year, I believe 😈

indigo plaza