#Res Check

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lavish vault
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have you read my 15 bullet points from the other threads?

lavish vault
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i think you have too many bullet points

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and the language is kinda weird. reads like chatgpt

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'Leveraged agile methodologies'

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'Advanced prerequisite architecture'

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also you're missing the R of the STAR framework

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are your project names censored or are they actually project1/2/3

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you list functional programming as a skill but then you don't mention a language like Haskell

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are you talking about python?

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imo it's a bit odd to list a hackathon without context, unless it's one that is widely known

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i don't live in the US so it may be idk

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besides the listing of courses
i would advise fixing this

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don't think you need this

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add dates to your projects

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i would read my points again ^

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overall it's not bad though

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but a good amount to improve on

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i don't think it's relevant yet then

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talk about whatever you did to qualify for it

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if anything

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okay add the word qualified or something then. i think you get the point

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look i've given you my thoughts, do with them what you will. i'm not gonna sit here and convince you

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feel free to ask questions or whatever

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but if you disagree with what i say

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it's fine

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but i'm not gonna discuss it at length if you still disagree

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depends on the roles you're applying for

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but the courses you have listed rn are wasted space on your cv

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every single grad has done those courses

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ok that's only helpful if you apply for jobs that they are relevant to

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also remove 'critical thinking' and 'verbal communication' pls

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remove 'leadership'. it should be demonstrated rather than stated

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i.e., with details

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well i've given some feedback on it already

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but it really depends on what i mentioned in #7

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looks fine

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i should note that where i live the system is way more 'human' if that makes sense. like i'm pretty likely to just have some dude read over my cv rather than be auto rejected by ats

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so if you have received specific advice then feel free to stick to it

lavish vault
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also it could be good to expand upon your involvement with the organisations you listed

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#3 and #4

lavish vault
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project 1 bullet point 2 is a bit clunky

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and stop writing like chatgpt

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'orchestrated'

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it's confusing when you use words like 'spearheaded' and 'pioneered' because you don't give any context. were you even working with others?