No interviews from last 2 months

[steady thicket]

Get rid of objective

[night cairn]

Get rid of objective and use latex

[steady thicket]

Ur resume looks blurry or something

[night cairn]

Courses: -

Weird

[prime silo]

okay so one major thing is you’re not showing what you have learnt/gained from these experiences

also imo it’s not necessarily useful to list things you did in college with zero extra detail

[steady thicket]

Get rid of containers at the bottom

[neon maple]

Rename academic experience to just Projects

[steady thicket]

As well as AWS

specify which aws services

[prime silo]

also no offense but i swear i fell asleep by the time i read Hadoop for the third time

[neon maple]

Theres so many AWS services though...

[steady thicket]

The ones you are most comfortable with

Otherwise some old interviewer is gonna try to grill you with a random service

[prime silo]

also you are probably listing too many technical skills, unless you are actually competent with them all. if you’re good with React then it implies you can not be an idiot when it comes to Angular, etc

[neon maple]

Fair

[steady thicket]

Get rid of XCode

[stiff pasture]

well tbh I just kept on adding in those skills section for ATS

[prime silo]

you can replace objective with “personal profile” where you give a brief summary of where you are in your career and what you’re looking for

[stiff pasture]

yea I have a template in latex would make the new one there

[prime silo]

okay but it makes you look inexperienced. there’s a balance

[stiff pasture]

gotcha

[steady thicket]

the whole objective thing isn’t really needed, I had in back in high school haven’t had it since

[stiff pasture]

Yea I would remove that thing

[steady thicket]

They used to preach that for general resumes but for tech resumes it’s not really worth it

[prime silo]

i think this is the main thing tbh. you need punchy, important sentences that follow a structure and convey what you did, how you did it, and what you learnt from it (and hence how you can be helpful to this company recruiting you). look up the STAR format

[steady thicket]

Bold those statistics

[prime silo]

personal profile is good to save recruiters some time

[steady thicket]

Recruiters are number monkeys they don’t know tech lingo 50% of the time

They just look for numbers and buzzwords

[stiff pasture]

than would write some personal profile in place of objective

[prime silo]

“devised a business implementation logic”?

you have a lot of grammar errors

a vs an etc

[steady thicket]

Your projects need to describe the purpose in the first bullet or so

Otherwise it’s like not at all clear what it is going on

capitalize Spark

[prime silo]

it doesn’t make sense to have “courses” and “academic experience” as two separate things. if the items in courses are important then they should be expanded upon and hence moved to academic experience or removed

[stiff pasture]

would specify the place, it's personal financial banking application

[stiff pasture]

ok so it's like give out a single line summary and mention what we did in other bullet points

[stiff pasture]

hm.. would remove the courses

[steady thicket]

First bullet mention what it is you are making and the tools are you using to

Other bullets expand on features and technical stuff used to build those out

[prime silo]

just really read your cv and a lot should pop out. why have you written both MySQL and SQL?

and really read through and consider your bullet points with the STAR framework up next to you

you can remove a lot of waffle

you want to smack them in the face with juicy punchy bullet points

[stiff pasture]

hm.. would change and look up the star format

[prime silo]

i don’t mean this in an offensive way but is english not your first language?

[neon maple]

Would it be bad to list both Postgres and MySQL

[stiff pasture]

yup, english is not my first language

[prime silo]

you might as well just put Postgres

[prime silo]

ok, and i’m not saying it to be rude but it definitely shows in your CV. i’m not gonna find every single grammatical error for you but i suggest having a friend help you with the “flow” of your sentences

hope you’re not overwhelmed with all the feedback. only trying to help, and it just means you have a lot to improve on and hopefully get more engagement from recruiters. good luck

[stiff pasture]

nah it's cool, maybe this is the result of all the changes am making without thinking through, just to fit the job description

let me make all the changes