full stack web developer with 3 YOE in MERN stack

[chrome hawk]

i think the lines are too wordy, a recruiter would typically skim over your CV and big blocks of text like that would be unappealing

it would help to make certain keywords bold and shorten some points

[somber chasm]

Yeah, it's not that skimmable. I'll break up the big bullet points in sub bullet points to make it work. And maybe bold the techs mentioned?

[tough moon]

Dont even use sub bullet points