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wind jackal · 2023-07-29T09:20:05.791Z

- You don't have to mention "using Figma" in both bullets

wind jackal Jul 29, 2023, 9:20 AM

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You don't have to mention "using Figma" in both bullets

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Imo "fully-functional" isn't the best term to describe a project. It being functional is the bare minimum.

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The bullets for your extracurriculars are too long. Break them up into 2.

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Did you not use Next.js for your econm site? If not, did you use React 18 with SSR?

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The bullet for your latest work experience is far too big. Should be broken down into multiple.

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You mentioned you worked on the C# api, so I'd write it in "Languages"

honest comet Jul 29, 2023, 1:30 PM

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untold ridge Jul 29, 2023, 2:13 PM

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collaborative team effort really doensn't say much

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if u have work experience, you probably worked with others

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definitely break apart your firstbullt point

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also mabye censor your ECs a bit more if u want to hide your identit

lucid osprey Jul 29, 2023, 3:14 PM

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Honestly one of the cleanest/most visually cohesive resumes I’ve seen

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I wouldn’t bold dates unless you think that adds value

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I would split first work exp into two bullets

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I would flesh out your projects and cut down extracurricular. And I would move skills either above education or just below

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Generally projects > ec

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Unless you have some insane ec like math contest or programming contest etc

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Depends tho

hardy galleon Jul 29, 2023, 5:29 PM

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you have a very solid resume - i would honestly keep any vocab that is indicative of your ux/ui expertise - having your toes in both swe and design is quite synergistic for frontend-oriented teams.

i would put tech skills last, projects second to last, and actually your ECs are great

for some reason cs majors neglect the impact of leadership positions in extracurriculars (non technical or not) when that’s the one aspect of their resume that is lacking - you can pad your resume with all the technicals in the world but you also need to demonstrate to recruiters soft skills

i’d expand on those two EC roles

honest comet Jul 29, 2023, 5:29 PM

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you have a very solid resume - i would honestly keep any vocab that is indicative of your ux/ui expertise - having your toes in both swe and design is quite synergistic for frontend-oriented teams.

i would put tech skills last, projects second to last, and actually your ECs are great

for some reason cs majors neglect the impact of leadership positions in extracurriculars (non technical or not) when that’s the one aspect of their resume that is lacking - you can pad your resume with all the technicals in the world but you also need to demonstrate to recruiters soft skills

i’d expand on those two EC roles

hardy galleon Jul 29, 2023, 5:30 PM

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honest comet you have a very solid resume - i would honestly keep any vocab that is indicativ...

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wise rivet Jul 29, 2023, 5:30 PM

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honest comet you have a very solid resume - i would honestly keep any vocab that is indicativ...

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honest comet Jul 29, 2023, 5:49 PM

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Np, glad to help

wind jackal Jul 29, 2023, 5:57 PM

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Ahhh, I c

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From your resume it seems like you're more interested in doing frontend/design stuff

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So I'd recommend you do a Next.js project as well

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It's a good way to learn about SPA vs MPA

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You mentioned that you followed a tutorial

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I think it's fine to build projects that follow tutorials

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But a good way to learn more from them

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Is to adapt them and truly make them your own

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Instead of just following the "Make a Reddit Clone" tutorial exactly

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Follow the tutorial and instead make a book sharing forum

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Also if you want an idea for a more backend heavy project

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https://www.banana.dev/

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Build a full stack app around one of the one-click deploy models from this site

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It has a free tier as well iirc

rare loom Jul 29, 2023, 9:34 PM

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remove “.” in lines and make it more bullet pointy instead of paragraphy @gusty crypt

wise rivet Jul 29, 2023, 9:45 PM

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If you wanna do backend, maybe remove your intro

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Cuz ui/ux is like frontend

snow raptor Jul 29, 2023, 10:39 PM

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I think you should bold your metrics/outcomes from your internships instead of the technologies used

loud bough Jul 29, 2023, 11:51 PM

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hardy galleon you have a very solid resume - i would honestly keep any vocab that is indicativ...

ye having multiple jobs is defo a plus point resume wise

untold ridge Jul 29, 2023, 11:53 PM

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you should remove descriptions

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your ruesme alrsays this

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yes

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get rid of the objective intro stuff

loud bough Jul 29, 2023, 11:59 PM

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wecu what are u saying

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o wait get rid of ur intro

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that's boomer af

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wecu im srry

untold ridge Jul 30, 2023, 12:01 AM

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Work Experience 1:

Two bullets, too wordy each. Each should take one line.

Work Experience 2:

Hosted $1b in projects using ...
One line, impact first

Sunnybun:

Fully functional bad. Split ideas into bullets with different things achieved. Too wordy.

GoalGetter:
-Idea 1 (summary)
-Implemented cross paltform using react native

MoonyTheCat:
-both bullets could be removed and replaced

Skills:
-nothing really, maybe too muhc text in one spot

ECs 1:
-a lot of words for a lot of nothing :(

EC 2:
-same

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the format and structure is good for sure, would defintiely rewrite this entire thing though

loud bough Jul 30, 2023, 12:02 AM

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untold ridge Jul 30, 2023, 12:02 AM

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and replace all the projects

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untold ridge Jul 30, 2023, 12:02 AM

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I would start with a major rewrite emphasizing impact first for all your roles

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Then, fix your projects

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your projects are bascially the same skills 3 times

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try to diversify

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and go in more depth

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one good project is worth a thousand scripts idk

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the resume is not bad at all

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but has a lot of room for imporvement

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good luck

loud bough Jul 30, 2023, 12:04 AM

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maybe expand on one of the projects or do a project for fun

untold ridge Jul 30, 2023, 12:04 AM

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this is ur most importatns zn

loud bough Jul 30, 2023, 12:04 AM

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i get cool ideas all of the time

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ye that's the same problem

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i think a method is to pick the easiest idea

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since that's usually the best

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also hackathons are nice to dish out quick projects

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since u have a deadline

hardy galleon Jul 30, 2023, 12:38 AM

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TA is big big plus

loud bough Jul 30, 2023, 12:41 AM

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bro im still ghosted for a grader position KEKW_RECESSION_EDITION

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i should probably follow up

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i do recommend just applying with as many fixes as u can asap, ur resume is strong as it is and u alr have gotten responses from it
just that timing is the most limiting factor rn

minor magnet Jul 30, 2023, 5:27 PM

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You got offer from jpmc?

gritty palm Jul 30, 2023, 5:32 PM

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what tutorial u doing

gritty palm Jul 30, 2023, 7:16 PM

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can u put projects done by tutorials on cv?

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oh so some ppl do it?

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lol

minor magnet Jul 30, 2023, 7:24 PM

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If you get into that hackathon , youre guaranteed an offer ?

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Sheesh congrats

unkempt spade Jul 30, 2023, 7:43 PM

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gritty palm can u put projects done by tutorials on cv?

yes but try to add on to them in your own way

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like if a tutorial is buil;ding a site, add something more to the site to make it your own

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