looking for roasting and toasting
#Roast the TikTok guy
median sparrow
analog rune
I would remove the part of you being a tiktoker
Jk if you have good content I think it’ll help make you stand out more
torn meadow
No github links for projects? Just curious why you decided against it. I was initially worried that it would mess with ATS but I've heard people say otherwise
Unless they're not public of course
median sparrow
No github links for projects? Just curious why you decided against it. I was ini...
i linked it in the titles, but i don’t have room for them as separated text 😔
weary marten
Second bullet point for your first experience: “Demonstrating strong proficiency in JavaScript and project planning skills” You should be giving an example of that in your bullet point such that your recruiter can say that about you.
First bullet point of Information Tech Security Access Specialist: you could maybe include the platform you used to monitor those access control readers if its interesting
Second bullet point of Information Tech Security Access: Don’t use adverbs and especially don’t lead with adverbs. Lead with action words so remove successfully and efficiently. If you want to say you did it efficiently, maybe guesstimate some metrics if you can or show how you did that.
First bullet point at Student Instructor: Don’t say it’s popular, because you prove it by saying you taught 1600+ students. Also this makes it into one line and not break into two lines which gives you more space on your resume.
For your last experience: “Freeing up valuable time and resources for organization” is obvious when you’re speeding up something. It’s just wordy for no reason. “Which impacted” -> “enabling”.
Tiktok: Don’t say “garnered” because it doesn’t describe anything specific. What would be a more accurate description of your process for getting such a high following? Maybe “Curated computer science content (you can be more specific here) on TikTok platform resulting in 13,000+ followers and 1.1mil likes.” Also to be honest I would not put this project first unless you’re interested in pursuing more social media aspects of cs.
Resume Rewriter needs another bullet point. Maybe split up that really long one into two.
Passive Income: Don’t talk about “during the summer of junior high school” nobody needs to know that. Reword second bullet point: “Deployed game on Stream for download, resulting in 500+ players during test development”
median sparrow
Second bullet point for your first experience: “Demonstrating strong proficiency...
- definitely should give an example thank you 🫡
- not that interesting, ill ponder it tho
- will add an action word thank you 🫡
- NEED THAT SPACE thank you!!
- ill change the wording most def
- I like currated ill most likely go with that, and I should move the order of it most def
- split time 🔪
- THANK YOU
boreal badge
Wouldn’t TikTok content creator go under experience not project
median sparrow
its not really "experience"
but youre right, not really a project either
i would make another section if headers werent so bulky
boreal badge
its not really "experience"
Nah it’s self employment
Entrepreneurship
So u could put it in experience e
Cuz that’s what tech with Tim wrote on his resume
median sparrow
tech with tim 😍
sudden badge
remove tiktok 😂 😂
median sparrow
remove tiktok 😂 😂
never
sudden badge
it's gonna make them roll their eyes no flame 🙄
sudden badge
haha new insecurity
it's just taking up alot of space, maybe minimize it and add a project
median sparrow
thats true, i dont want it taking TOO much space it shouldnt be like a highlight
just an eyegrabber
will do thank you 🫡
spare dune
I’ve been told by peeps to put skills under education too