Junior looking for 2024 SWE internships

[runic cradle]

• Do you have a result for point 1? Why'd you make a gRPC service in the first place? (idk what that is)
• ^ Applies for the other points
• I would put point 2 at the bottom if that's all you have, or replace it with smth on the softer skill side

• Reword point 1 bc of repetition (the by 23% by part)
• Did point 2 result in anything?

• I'm not sure what you mean by "scaled [product name] by 14%"
• I feel like you need to find another word for "by"
  -" Created real-time dashboard" (dashboard of what?)
• Did anything result from poitn 4? Hwow did you perform load tests?

ok ig you mention the dashboard's use later which ig is ok...

Think you need to find a new starter word for the dashboard stuff bc they all start with "created"

• I would list the technologies used in the points itself than put them in the project name part

(eg. "Developed and deployed a full-stack web application using the Node.js framework, allowing users to enter course grades and calculate their GPA."

"Utilized API" which API? If there isn't a specific name, add a description (eg. "Utilized School (?) API to..." <- not very good wording on my part)

[next grail]

bro why you don't need this 💀

[runic cradle]

wdym

[next grail]

not you but yakuna he cracked

[runic cradle]

yeee he is

feel like it's a pretty good resume overall

[little pelican]

Patrick says thank you very much

[little pelican]

I think so too, what do you recommend

[little pelican]

• I created gRPC service for more visibility in trading system
• Even though point 2 doesnt sound like much, it was hard because of the way things were organized. I had to move things around in order to actually surface the cancel reason.

[little pelican]

• I need help rewording 💀
• I never tested bullet pt 2, but I could make up some metrics

[little pelican]

• Scaled meaning increasing the rate limit of the api (maybe I should put this instead of just scaled)
• I cant find another word for by
• It was just a real-time monitoring dashboard, not sure if I should include the specifics because it's too long
• After performing the load tests, I found the limit (rate limit) and also the application that's the bottleneck of the system

[runic cradle]

https://www.thesaurus.com/browse/created

[runic cradle]

I mean point 2 doenst sound as impactful compared to the other ones

Like on paper it doesnt sound as significant methinsk

[runic cradle]

"Developed a Python script that collects remote log files with SFTP, streamlining the debugging process by 23%" or smth idk

[runic cradle]

I mean you could also move it down to the last point

[runic cradle]

• Yes
• idk another word for by unfortunately
• I mean you mention its use later so I think that point of mine isnt as relevant
• I'd add "rate limits" to point 4 to be a bit more specific

[little pelican]

Thank you

[little pelican]

I looked at these but they didnt really fit