Rising sophomore looking for feedback for SWE!

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I would really appreciate any feedback! For example, regarding the formatting + if the content actually is getting across important points.

Thanks so much!

[vivid merlin]

Having the title of engineering manager will probably hurt you more than help. You’re still a student.

You might want to rename it to Product Manager Intern.

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Interesting, thank you! That seems to make sense. Is it just because of seniority and what they would think compared to my experience level?

And other than that detail, I'm not sure how the rest of my resume spans out?

[vivid merlin]

So when someone is an engineering manager, they expect someone with 5+ YOE as a SWE.

The grammar at the end of the first bullet needs fixing

Even though this is your current position, make sure it’s all past tense

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Sorry just to clarify, which part do you mean by end of my first bullet (I'm guessing the "leading team of 20 students..." one)?

[vivid merlin]

“For updating data points without internet.” Sounds grammatically off to me. I’m guessing the data isn’t allowed to traverse the internet?

[polar rampart]

@vivid merlin what's a good way to rephrase "head of engineering" if that was what your role was called

[vivid merlin]

Product Manager Intern.

[polar rampart]

Ok thanks

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Quick follow-up on this: would changing it from EM to Engineering Manager Intern make it better too, compared to Product Manager Intern?

[vivid merlin]

It would be kinda weird to see that, as it’s not common in the industry.

[polar rampart]

CEO intern

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Ah I see, thank you!

[rugged barn]

ah i see

[vivid merlin]

But putting down SWE instead of SWE intern might be stretching too much.