any feedback welcome. looking for 2024 internships | cscareers.dev | Page 1

tender estuary Jul 6, 2023, 10:26 PM

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aii yoo idt you require 2 universities in education

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since you were a transfer student u could remove the old one

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data conversion intern -> maybe change the position name

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idt you need a period for bullet points

feral temple Jul 6, 2023, 10:27 PM

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tender estuary since you were a transfer student u could remove the old one

fairs, was thinking of this

feral temple Jul 6, 2023, 10:28 PM

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tender estuary data conversion intern -> maybe change the position name

idk what to change it to 😭

tender estuary Jul 6, 2023, 10:28 PM

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experience 1 point 3 -> pretty sure its labelling with double l

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if you did any coding for experience 2 add it and specify which languages or technologies dud u use

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maybe add some metrics

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i like how your points are very clear...recruiters will find it easy to understand what you are saying

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your projects wordings can be better

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project 1

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Developed a color pallete generator with SOME percent accuracy using OpenAI's APIs, HTML, and yiur technologies

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add metrics for all your projects

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your projects are very good

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for skills

feral temple Jul 6, 2023, 10:32 PM

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I appreciate you so much!

tender estuary Jul 6, 2023, 10:32 PM

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C and C++ are different languages so seperate it with comma and not a slash

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try Frameworks/Technologies or just Technologies: Looks better in my opinion

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and your leadership is good

#any feedback welcome. looking for 2024 internships