#Not passing any screens, feedback highly appreciated
1 messages · Page 1 of 1 (latest)
lets get it 
first of all... format/template:
- too much white space at margins and between lines
- ugly layout
second of all the content:
- your bullet points suck donkey balls.... you should rewrite them with a clear focus in mind: communicate technical achievement
- i recommend the google formula
Accomplished [X] as measured by [Y], by doing [Z].
someone with your experience should fill the whole page... maybe add some projects
let's see it 
I made mine in Word lol yolo
@upbeat wyvern wanna see mine?
I'd actually love some feedback it's been a minute
not as big as yours 😦
thank you

kk I'll DM
make fixes, tag me again, let's iterate and make it bomb.com
Bruh the template is all ready, you just need to change the textual content. Not much work

yeah im assuming my linkedin is also garbo lmao
i don't get many legitimate reach outs
me neither... probably because of my location tho
most are like bot messages asking me for 10 years of experience xD
bro was lurking
ðŸ˜
you're keeping the red eh?
It's the last one I uploaded, there b/w version
check dm
@glad acorn quick question

what is the software developer project?
is that a project or actual work?
cause if its a project put it under projects
yea why you putting project under experience
not experience

i rebuilt a netflix clone, that doesnt mean i have work experience with them
if it was like a full time gig you can keep it and say "Freelance" or something
if that makes sense
yeah i gotchu, reason it was there and not under projects is bc i thought a project section would look empty
oh no no... make a project section then
?
DM me your resume
yuou first
add me on linkedin
add me too 
dm me
it does, ty
so shy... sure
whats the T5 list maybe my school fell off actually
been a while since i checked xD

what are t5/t10
well you're competing against other t5 resumes
and theirs aint looking like yours my boy
hey i never said anything it was the other guy 😠ik mine is subpar
i think its the format
cause this much experience is good, but the way you format it is making my eyes hurt
ty all for the feedback, got another one ready and it’s a night and day difference can’t believe i was applying to places with the old one ðŸ˜
was so shit

