Rising Sophomore Transferring to T10 school

[cursive quarry]

I'm a rising sophomore about to start applying for Summer 2024 internships and I wanted to post my resume before I start applying to get some advice.

[opal saddle]

hm a couple things

imo

this doesn't really mean too much w/o more context

if i were u

i would prob switch to percentage

some other things

[cursive quarry]

i dont really know the percentage, I might be able to ask around at work and figure it out though, is that worth it?

[opal saddle]

i would remove link

since u already have

git

and it can mess w parsing

the 2nd most utilized view seems

a bit awkard imo

try to avoid using subjective words like "effortless"

[cursive quarry]

also -- for the unicorn im working on an app that has 11 million monthly users, should i mention that in one of the bullet points?

[opal saddle]

hm

maybe u can mention that

feature u refactor

is used by 11 million users

rather than second most utilized views

[cursive quarry]

okay bet ill do that

[opal saddle]

this is reduntatn imo

cuz already said it was clone in project name

[cursive quarry]

should i just get rid of the description altogether

[opal saddle]

well i think it's fine

but just remove a clone of lovebox utilizng

i have mine formatted like this

[cursive quarry]

ahh i see

[opal saddle]

hm this is vague imo

[cursive quarry]

its kinda complicated to explain i guess? I can send the pdf for more context

[opal saddle]

im assuming ur predict some sort of value right? idk what u were predicting or how

data was structured

so maybe say to "predict x trend"

[cursive quarry]

yea essentially, we used data to predict the amount of remote workers in different cities

okay i see now

[opal saddle]

yeah

same point

from earlier

subjective wording should be avoided if possible

idk if u signed a nda cuz they usually make u do so for gov work but the "Critical Program Information assessments" seems vague imo

[cursive quarry]

nah that's exactly what they were called and i didnt have an nda