made some changes. pls critique

[sturdy flower]

If you’re gpa is above 3.5 put it

I’d say try to increase the bullet points for your projects or try to add more tools into it

You don’t need to put to and from for your education you can just put expected grad: 2027

I wouldn’t put for online community

If you have any extracurriculars that you could put I’d try putting in that and remove the experience that you have for subway

Also I just realized but you didn’t put your major….

Or declared major

Put the relevant coursework that you’ve taken so far

I can’t tell what’s behind redacted but make sure to have your email, phone number, LinkedIn, and GitHub

You wrote framework and then write gauge framework

Put the time that you worked on the project, so from what day to which day

Hack compiler and assembler you use past tense and then use present tense

[tame sequoia]

you mean you wouldnt put time?

[tame sequoia]

its under university of waterloo. Computer engineering

[sturdy flower]

no the actual words "for online community"

[tame sequoia]

okok

[tame sequoia]

ye i got that

[sturdy flower]

If it's an engineering degree just put bachelors of science or bachelors of engineering

it's weird to say candidate for x major

[tame sequoia]

i believe thats what you have to do for engineering. everyone ive talked to uses that

[sturdy flower]

Even if it's not your declared major just do it like that

oh really

[tame sequoia]

yea. cuz technically ur not an engineer yet

something dumb

like that

[sturdy flower]

I'd still put bachelors of engineering: Computer Engineering

BSeC I think is the abreviation

[tame sequoia]

what could i put instead? cuz otherwise i think it sounds odd if i remove that part. i want to mention that its for an online community still

[sturdy flower]

your first bullet points mentions online community...

And you still have the title socail media account manager

[tame sequoia]

do you mean the description. "social media account manager for online community"

ill remove it from there

[sturdy flower]

oh yeah I meant from there

[tame sequoia]

ye

thanks

[sturdy flower]

Also if you look at the dates

I think you were trying to keep it at 3 letters for each month

but then for some you have 4

and then education you put the whole

Be consistent, it doesn't matter which way you decide

[tame sequoia]

got it