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plucky scaffold
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Very solid resume and love the metrics in your bullet poitns.. I can't help but notice you barely mention the languages or tools you used in your internships?

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What language/tech did you even use in your second internship???

brisk sluice
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Mainly just python

plucky scaffold
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and for the latest internship... typescript? Thats it?

plucky scaffold
brisk sluice
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Ahhh I c

plucky scaffold
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when you switch to google apis

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what was involved in that in terms of language/tech

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i'll help you rewrite that bullet point

brisk sluice
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Docker, understanding how the ci/cd pipeline worked, some commands mainly just to get the grab the smoke test results and installing dependencies and then the rest was just typescript which was actually generating the 2fa token and using that to send it to the person who made the push

plucky scaffold
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yeah there's a lot more than you can include then

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and you did it in Python you said?

brisk sluice
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2nd internship was mainly just python and we ran it on annoconda, not really too much I know to add to that

plucky scaffold
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lets focus on the google api bullet point

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for now

brisk sluice
plucky scaffold
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So I would say:

Standardized smoke test notifications by migrating component to Google APIs using Typescript, improving GitLab's CI/CD pipeline reliability by 12%

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"reliability" is a loose term maybe you can find a real metric for that part

brisk sluice
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Mhmm, I forgot to include this but originally it was sent through SMTP

plucky scaffold
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maybe uptime or something idk

brisk sluice
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But security had disabled the access token

plucky scaffold
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LOL smtp that's some anceint shit

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all good those are minute details maybe for the interview

brisk sluice
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So technically the reliability increased by 100%

plucky scaffold
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for the resume you can keep the high level interesting stuff

brisk sluice
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Bc it wasn’t working before 🫡

plucky scaffold
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CI completion rate? something related?

brisk sluice
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^yeah that’s why I didn’t really put in a metric bc it’s not really something that could be metric

plucky scaffold
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it is you gotta think about it

brisk sluice
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It re setup something that was in their tech debt

plucky scaffold
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theres always a metric KEKW

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ok so why did they set it up?

brisk sluice
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Most of the numbers I’ve had on the resume is from me thinking about it

plucky scaffold
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just to have?

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sure that's good... the metrics are really good

brisk sluice
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Ya, increased speed at which smoke test results are delivered to user by ~13%

brisk sluice
plucky scaffold
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that's fine as long as its an educated guess

plucky scaffold
brisk sluice
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Mhmm, I’ll try thinking of a metric to use and come back here

plucky scaffold
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Yeah do that

brisk sluice
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But I think the point of putting the language in the bullets is prob the most important

plucky scaffold
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And go over your bullet points and try to include tech used

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you're leaving a lot on the table I think

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yeah exaclty

brisk sluice
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Other than that how’s my resume so far?

plucky scaffold
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Pretty good I like it

solid ledge
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I think it’s mostly the lack of experience… your resume is already very good

brisk pond
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Are the dates for the second and third work experiences perhaps off?

brisk sluice
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No it was only for 1 month

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It was a winter internship

brisk sluice
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If it ended near the end of January should I just put February instead

fluid moon
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Honestly ur better off lying here

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1 month internships looks sus

brisk sluice
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I’m liking the way you think 🤔

brisk sluice
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Oh yeah how much does college matter for getting call backs or something like that

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Bc I do not go to a target school

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My college is a CUNY

golden lodge
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I want to know too, if thats okay

brisk sluice
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^fixed up my resume a bit if anyone could look at it

plucky scaffold
timid dagger
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what resume template is this?

brisk sluice
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also there is a line underneath technical experience it's just that when I took the photo it didn't come up