going for fall 2023/summer 2024 internships, roast pls

[green monolith]

• you're going a bit too crazy with the bolding... chill the fuck out with that 😂 bold only technologies and metrics... don't bold shit like "convolutional neural networks" and "western developers league" it's really distracting
• your bullet points are decent but the sentence structure needs some work and it makes it hard to read. Try to make it consistent. Use the google formula: "Accomplished [X] as measured by [Y], by doing [Z]."
• Your club work is not work experience, put in a "Projects" section
• for your current role, do NOT leave it empty!!!!! I would include one line about the type of project and the technologies youll be using.
• idk why IPEX has a bullet point but not designbot??
• why are your projects in present tense but everything else is in past tense? Again, make your bullet points and sentences consistent and easy to read...

You have some really good content, just needs some polish and it will be nice 👌🏼

[oblique trail]

That sounds good, I’ll try following the XYZ format. DesignBot is a part time remote internship right now which I’ve just started recently so I’m gonna add in stuff for that soon. IPEX is an actual summer internship so I was just given that it’s related to the IT department so I included that. Definitely, I will reduce the bolding, there is too much I agree. I have the projects in present tense as I am still working on them. Why should club work be in the projects section? It’s still experience no?

[green monolith]

Club work is not a job. It should be in extracurricular or projects... Especially with the titles you're using like "full stack engineer" etc.

Comes off as 🧢

[oblique trail]

But I am pretty sure the companies aren’t dumb enough to think it’s an actual job since it’s mentioned as club. The title is “Experience” which accounts for work, extracurricular, etc., which I guess they understand. But yeah I guess it couldn’t hurt to take those out and put them into a section called “Extracurriculars”

[green monolith]

No but when a bot is parsing your resume it counts it as work a bot can't tell the difference

It may come off as misleading at worst

[oblique trail]

I see, so I guess have “Work Experience” and “Extracurriculars” section to differentiate it?

[green monolith]

Yeah or just in projects

[oblique trail]

Sounds good, thanks for the feedback man!