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[main beacon]

can you attach as jpg or png?

[hollow pond]

Yes

[main beacon]

Probably adding skills for experience, but that would be it

[runic cove]

"Reduced the team's effort up to 15% by automating existing processes and providing troubleshooting expertise."

What is meant by team's effort?
What is meant by automating?
What is meant by existing processes?
What troubleshooting expertise?

[hollow pond]

Thanks will frame it differently, anything else you'd suggest to look into?

[runic cove]

hiring managers usually will spend only 6 seconds before reading any further, you need to get past that first

[valid gorge]

Looks decent overall, aside from the comments above, it's mostly nitpicks:

• Avoid using uncommon job roles for your job titles. Contrary to popular belief, it's ok to put the generic title of what you actually did as opposed to the title your org gave you.

So in your case Technology Consulting Intern, try generalizing it to match a more commonly used term that matches your actual SWE work. From 1st glance I'd peg you as a Data Analyst/Engineer.
This is so you don't confuse the recruiters (lol, they can be a obtuse bunch) and your roles are clear from the offset - don't give them a chance to think or it's immediately thrown in the "no" pile.

• Watch your spacing in the Projects section - IMO I'd even take out your two worst projects and use bullets for your sentences instead to make some room. Visually it looks squeezed down below.

• Too many skills in your Skills section, I'd be hard pressed you know each one intricately, and sometimes less is more, also to ensure you don't get caught during an interview with an actual SME in the technology you've listed. Ensure whatever you have there, you can talk about it in some degree of depth. As a new-grad, I'd be suspicious you'd amassed all that knowledge in between school and life. Condense it a little, plus will make it easier to parse, especially if each category fits a line.

[hollow pond]

Gotcha!

[hollow pond]

Got it! Really helped, thanks for taking out the time to review 👍🏻

[unique comet]

@hollow pond i'm curious do u acc need to post ur bachelors?

[hollow pond]

Yeah ofcourse, why would you not want to mention your bachelors degree?

[unique comet]

idk since you're doing ur masters i'd assume bachelors aint' importatnt

i was doing a math + stats deg dropped out to cs in another uni and i've been told to drop the old uni on my resume so i thought it'd be the same

[hollow pond]

It would be ideal to mention your masters and bachelors degree on your resume, especially cause I'm an international student

[royal jay]

did you get any call backs for this resume?

@hollow pond

[hollow pond]

I did not

[royal jay]

me too

[unique comet]

it do be rough out there brothers @hollow pond @royal jay hang in there brahs