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wintry swallow Feb 28, 2023, 6:54 PM

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bump!

ruby elk Feb 28, 2023, 9:47 PM

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skills at the bottom

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remove some less relevant projects to make room for more descriptions

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recruiters are expecting more than just what it is

wintry swallow Mar 1, 2023, 1:48 AM

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@ruby elk I updated some, feel free to roast me

ruby elk Mar 1, 2023, 1:51 AM

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i'm not going to go into content but

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I'd unbolden the dates, they stand out enough as is

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and then bolden the technologies+languages you used within descriptions

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I at least avoid just dumping all languages+technologies I used in lists (that's what the skills section is for)

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I weave them all into my descriptions

wintry swallow Mar 1, 2023, 2:06 AM

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@ruby elk thanks, and do you mean that I dumped all the relative tech stacks in the projects section?

ruby elk Mar 1, 2023, 2:06 AM

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yeah, not a huge problem

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but I don't think dumping a list of tech stack is that helpful

wintry swallow Mar 1, 2023, 2:11 AM

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I think you are right, I can just bolden tech stacks in the description

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again thanks for the feedback

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I'll prob work on my resume for a bit

wintry swallow Mar 2, 2023, 6:33 AM

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Bump!

wintry swallow Mar 2, 2023, 8:29 PM

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Need some resume roast and feedbacks 🙏 (new grad)

wintry swallow Mar 3, 2023, 5:28 PM

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(Sobbing silently) 🥲 bump for feedbacks !

spare estuary Mar 4, 2023, 6:31 AM

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It is Django

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Serving over 900 multifunction teams sounds like a fluff metric

wintry swallow Mar 4, 2023, 6:35 AM

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spare estuary It is Django

Dang I thought their logo is not capitalized

wintry swallow Mar 4, 2023, 6:36 AM

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spare estuary Serving over 900 multifunction teams sounds like a fluff metric

Well actually it is, around 912 smth. internal tool at Apple across the globe

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Or should I trim it down?

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Oof official docs uses capitalized name apart from logo . Gotta fix it. Thanks! @spare estuary

spare estuary Mar 4, 2023, 6:58 AM

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Re: whether to mention the 912 teams metric - depends how attributable the entire tool is to you. If you own the tool (i.e. responsible for design and maintenance), might make sense to say that. Otherwise it is like saying I committed code to Facebook app which has 4 billion MAU

wintry swallow Mar 4, 2023, 6:27 PM

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spare estuary Re: whether to mention the 912 teams metric - depends how attributable the entir...

So basically, I had an access to the entire project, and was working on feature implementation, debugging , and PoC test involving multiple meetings with different orgs (iOS, MacOS, WatchOS, global chain, design, marketing and more etc)

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Would it be better to just say 'hundreds' instead of 'over 900'?

spare estuary Mar 4, 2023, 8:29 PM

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If you are staff engineer, that figure might not be sus. If you are a new grad or junior, that figure is sus. My opinion

#Need some resume roast and feedbacks 🙏 (new grad)