#Can I apply for a job

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dreamy beacon
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code there cameras

modest bay
dreamy beacon
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code camera ong

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u flipping burger

modest bay
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yes

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Is this enough for Mcdonalds? Can I apply for faang

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Can I apply for a job Is this enough for Mcdonalds? Can I apply for a job

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Can I apply for a job

spring scarab
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Run it through a typo checker. There are a few misspellings and grammar errors. There is also inconsistent capitalization and use of verb tenses throughout the text

GPA can be to one decimal place

First bullet point is italicized where it shouldn't be

The hackathon one says Jan 2022 - present. The way it refers to the hackathon as "the hackathon" implies the hackathon is still going, like one uninterrupted event

"Giving guidance" -> "Providing ..."

What is "Know framework"? You could try a frameworks section since it continues to the next line anyway

modest bay
spring scarab
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"Co-Host and led" -> "Led"
"multiple review session" -> "multiple review sessions"

"3 -4 weeks" -> "3-4 weeks"
"diagram drew" -> "diagrams drawn"

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The volunteer experience section is a bit confusing without context for what the different color teams are

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If your college/uni has a resume review service, it could be a big help.

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i think the first bullet points for both of these positions are very similar
the only new content being added with the second position is the Git configuration

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modest bay
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Ok I will fix these right away my uni does have one I will drop it in after these changes

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Though the ta are both for different course do I combine them into one job?

spring scarab
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For the memory allocator, the "distributing memory ..." part could be shortened to "distributing memory according to requests by individual programs"

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If it's for something like a fast food place, you could drop the technical projects because they probably don't care about that

They probably care more about people skills from the TA positions and volunteer stuff than the tech skills

Having something to suggest endurance or tolerance for standing for long periods could help.

A sentence idea: "Provided 30+ hours of in-person presentations to audiences ranging from 10 to 50 students, clarifying concepts presented in class and reviewing technical problems"

For FAANG or tech companies, try to use a separate resume where the positions with tech skills are more towards the top

modest bay
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Thank you so much for the help