#Is this any good
livid belfry
dire axle
I’d be wary about the readability of white text on a light green background
tawdry gull
I love the color palette
undone hearth
Here are a few of my thought in the presention.
The two paras here need to be aligned on the left side
Also in the outfit font discription, i feel the word outfit is overly used and the text seems repeated often. Try omitting the font name from certain lines and re-phrase them so that the entire body feel better to read (content wise).
In both these arrangements the alignment is different. Try keeping one type of alignment that is carried forward uniformly throughout your project. Either one is good, but I'd suggest pick one and stick with that .
Same goes for the text alignment. You've used justified text in the very beginning of the project, then you move on to centered and then left aligned.
I share similar concerns about the readability of the white text on green background. Someone with a visual disability will find it harder to read.
You can test your colours using an online colour checker
Idk if you're using the 60-30-10 rule but i felt you could use the orange a bit more in your designs; considering it is also a primary colour. You've actually chosen a balanced colour palette. The bright orange adds a nice contrast to the calm pastel green. You could try using this contrast in certain areas to emphasize certain elements and add interest.
Hope i haven't gone too extra and hope it helps! Atb! ✨
vast nebula
In both these arrangements the alignment is different. Try keeping one type of a...
I will add here that this is probably too many screens added to illustrate the point of the paragraph on the right side
Which screen is the reader supposed to focus on
Also why are you showing onboarding is it because for your customers onboarding medical data was an issue?
livid belfry
this is what i like to hear, keep the critiques going, the more critiques the better the project.
alignment issues is a fair point
other than that, what do you like about the presentation.
do you like the overall idea
dire axle
I think it would be nice to know why you chose the colors and fonts. Your description of the fonts themselves are largely useless, it seems like its the shopping cart description for them - I don't think its too relevant imo
Looking at your prototype, some of the smaller text does seem like it has readability issues - I can't be sure but it does seem very small, especially for elderly who might be taking vitamin supplements
livid belfry
Looking at your prototype, some of the smaller text does seem like it has readab...
it is because of the recording, when using the application on my phone, the scaling seemed pretty readable.
unique vector
Anyone have feedback on this edit?
