Coffee Poster

[languid marlin]

Overall it's a good design just a few suggestions. I think the cup as the main focal point is working well but after that all the text is fighting for attention so decreasing the size of the text below the cup should be better. Right now the space above the cup is a little empty while the bottom is cramped and the info at the very bottom can be a little smaller I believe. Keep going 🫡

[dreamy musk]

Thanku! i just remade some things

[languid marlin]

See the text at the bottom looks better and less cramped ^^

Try pushing the coffee & koffie text a bit?

[dreamy musk]

I also made this today

any tips for this one?

[dreamy musk]

up?

[languid marlin]

I like it!!! Nice work!! The only thing I can see is that "bestel nu" seems to be too close to the burger maybe push it down a little

[languid marlin]

Yess

[dreamy musk]

Okay i will change it

let me see

[languid marlin]

A little more 😅

[languid marlin]

I am sorry 😅 can you reduce the gap between the cafe & koffie and vers gemaakt?

Sorry for not explaining properly

[dreamy musk]

ahh yes

[languid marlin]

Oh, i meant push the "vers gemaakt" up with the heading 😅

[dreamy musk]

ahh

[languid marlin]

Sorry for my terrible explanation

😅

[languid marlin]

Yesss

Good job!!!! :3

[dreamy musk]

Thankss

I'm going to create something new

I'm moving to a different country alone in 3 months at 18 so i really need the money ahaha

[languid marlin]

Woahh!!! Good luck!!!

Hope you achieve great thing brother/sister

I am going to sleep now hehe

[dreamy musk]

Thanks for ur helpp