#Guys, I need 5 minutes of your time for something important in my life.

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tulip sluice
vast wraith
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Looks simple nd visually appealing, bt I'm sure adding a color palette will enhance its beauty

raw snow
# tulip sluice https://project-life-to-live.vercel.app/ Hey everyone, hope you're doing well! ...

Really great work, it looks nice and clean. A few comments/suggestions after a quick glance:

  1. The main navigation is failing accessibility standards, you might want to adjust the color and size of the text so it's ledgible - this is happening on both light and dark versions. This also is happening in the non-active content tabs
  2. When scaling the browser window down and testing for responsiveness, there's a horizontal overflow issue that adds a horizontal scroll bar. The issues starts at 990px in width and I think it is cause by something in the body, but not positive without looking deeper
  3. Another responsive comment is that the logo in the main navigation takes a new shape and stacks if the browser window is scaled down. You could reduce the padding on the menu items instead so the logo stays inline
  4. The projects section examples are quite small and hard to comprehend, and clicking on one really only straightens it out and adds a little color. Maybe they can be a little larger?
  5. The Call To Action form at the bottom takes a long time to animate into view, I'd consider not adding complex animations to a CTA so the user isn't waiting for it to load as they could just scroll on by without waiting
  6. I wasn't sure what the circle at the top right was, I thought it was a bagel and clicked on it to see what would happen, not expecting it to be for music
  7. Maybe try adding a pop of color in places like CTAs or areas where important text/buttons could stand out a bit more
tulip sluice
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Thanks @vast wraith

tulip sluice
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@raw snow Thanks man, I appreciate the effort.

vast wraith
tulip sluice
tulip sluice
# raw snow Really great work, it looks nice and clean. A few comments/suggestions after a q...

Updates:

  1. The main navigation is failing accessibility standards, you might want to adjust the color and size of the text so it's ledgible - this is happening on both light and dark versions. This also is happening in the non-active content tabs (✋ Reviewing...)

  2. When scaling the browser window down and testing for responsiveness, there's a horizontal overflow issue that adds a horizontal scroll bar. The issue starts at 990px in width and I think it is caused by something in the body, but not positive without looking deeper (✅ Fixed)

  3. Another responsive comment is that the logo in the main navigation takes a new shape and stacks if the browser window is scaled down. You could reduce the padding on the menu items instead so the logo stays inline (✅ Fixed)

  4. The projects section examples are quite small and hard to comprehend, and clicking on one really only straightens it out and adds a little color. Maybe they can be a little larger? (Fixed ✅)

  5. The Call To Action form at the bottom takes a long time to animate into view, I'd consider not adding complex animations to a CTA so the user isn't waiting for it to load as they could just scroll on by without waiting (✅ Increased animation speed to avoid any delays)

  6. I wasn't sure what the circle at the top right was, I thought it was a bagel and clicked on it to see what would happen, not expecting it to be for music(✋ Noted)

  7. Maybe try adding a pop of color in places like CTAs or areas where important text/buttons could stand out a bit more (✅ Fixed)

Thanks again for the feedback!

orchid leaf
tulip sluice
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@orchid leaf Okay, I guess I know what you mean.

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I checked it, it's working can you please try again and let me know?

vast wraith
orchid leaf