event poster, can anybody give some advice?

[worthy lagoon]

i don't have basic design. i only recreating design from my references.
so that I'm confused about the design i've made.
any advice?

[zinc matrix]

I love the overall look! The M in minor definitely breaks up the flow.
I feel like the quote at the bottom could have some other type of font to go with, since it adds meaning to the theme of the event.

I'm also missing the start & end time

[worthy lagoon]

Hii.. can I DM u for more question and insights?