Portfolio feedback

[brittle forum]

I am in design for a 2 years and in my first portfolio I put my best projects that I made from poster design to illustrations and be very grateful to heard some feedback about how can I upgrade it. https://www.behance.net/gallery/240863009/Portfolio-Bohdan-Tkachuk

[bleak ocean]

Hi, I really like the colors and the texture.
Composition-wise, it could be even stronger if the margins were consistent on all sides, maybe lifting the content up a little.
I’d also suggest placing your picture and description on the left so it follows the reading flow better.

[gusty warren]

Hi @brittle forum

I agree with @bleak ocean that your colors and texture is really nice. I like the way you have painted the bottom half of your image into the circle.

Improvements:

1. Just as @bleak ocean mentioned that yes it makes sense to have the description on the left hand side

2. Even I felt that the margins could be increased a bit more from all sides

3. Check your typesetting for your body copy and need to work on your type hierarchy

Suggestion: I was thinking why not present it on a website using wix or square space

If you have any questions, feel free to send them over 😊

[brittle forum]

Thx so much for such a good feedback. I updated my portfolio could you please check it again? I hope it will be much better. Thank you.

[gusty warren]

You are most welcome

Ofc I can check the updated portfolio

[gusty warren]

It is much better and I can be you have changed the postion of your image and text which looks really nice. There are few things that need to be worked on

1. Alignment of the text needs to be on the left. Please see screenshot
2. Remove the experience section and instead replace it with design fields.
3. Make the Design field in a bullet format

Hope this helps 😊

[brittle forum]

Ok, got it, thank you again

[gusty warren]

No problem