looking for professional feedback for this compaign design

[eternal mauve]

which one look better please ? with bigger graphic or smaller one ?
also what do you think overall in technical and conceptual sides?

thanks!!

[obsidian orbit]

I would go with the second one

[eternal mauve]

okay, that's what i chose too, it feels more balanced

[obsidian orbit]

Yeah

[untold hornet]

@eternal mauve the smaller is better

[stoic fractal]

yeah, I agree and I feel like there could be a little bit more spacing between the symbols-section and the typography or maybe a higher line spacing. What do you think?

[dusky sphinx]

Second one is better but concept is looks simple ....

[eternal mauve]

Maybe higher line spacing yes, thanks.

more space between typographie and the symbols can make them disconnected maybe