#Case study is done
twin fractal
very unique project! i really enjoyed reading through it. I'm not the most experienced but i have some general pointers. like the text here is way too long and small. i think you should try summarizing it and making it a similar length to the other captions.
i think the layout here is off... becauess of the proximity of the text/images within their separate columns you read "emotional rejection -> "high-fidelity iteration using toybox..." -> strategic failure -> experiment 2: toybox trap. this ended up making me confused because i thought the screenshot you provided was directly related to the emotional rejection since that was the second thing i read. better to reformat and space it out so that the top two emojis/headlines are clearly separate from the toybox intro/screenshot. also move "Experiment 2: The Toybox Trap" to the left and the screenshot to the right
the layout of the overall page seems kind of inconsistent too, sometimes tehre are three columns of images, sometimes tehre are two. some headlines have number like (02) attached and some dont. i would assume the ones without are like sub headlines but they are still the same size as the headlines so the visual hierachy of the text is off
anyway i thought your solutions and thinking were really creative and as a heavy discord user i would definitely see the appeal and business impact of a wumpusbox
hope that helps
tropic kettle
hope that helps
Will fix in the morning, tysm
tropic kettle
hope that helps
Mind if I dm you to ask a question?
twin fractal
Mind if I dm you to ask a question?
ok go ahead