Do you guys like it?

[fossil fiber]

I made this video I want to start editing videos for people for a cheap price ☺️

[hearty steeple]

a few notes:
Im alredy - I'm already
the pace is too quick to read the whole text, either make it slower or put less text
the text about how it works is too close to the edges
this 3D effect on the text hurts my eyes, if you really want it, leave it on the headlines only

[fossil fiber]

Ok thank you for the feedback 😊 I'll make sure to fix these things

[halcyon otter]

Hi friend, the text feels a bit crowded.
Don't be afraid to make it a little smaller, as this will not only give it more order but also give it more hierarchy. Another thing you could do would be to gradually reveal sections of the text, one in, the other out.

[neon belfry]

Text Margin and Padding

[proven turret]

marketer's advice: speak it, show your face, no generic images or effects.

there is also no hook

that would only work on a warm audiece

if you're planning to put that in social media, it won't work

[fossil fiber]

Thank you everyone! These advices will help me a lot!